tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7776443105995961774.post6872951948916962333..comments2023-04-14T03:55:50.822-07:00Comments on Age TF Photostories: Ethnic Candies (Part 12)The Planet of the APhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14534010526352966337noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7776443105995961774.post-81299874738403663182015-01-27T09:18:57.351-08:002015-01-27T09:18:57.351-08:00I switched the clothes thing to the previous part ...I switched the clothes thing to the previous part because that one had more space for it. Thanks for the suggestion, though, I'll try to mind that in the future.The Planet of the APhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00033283755173425867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7776443105995961774.post-63716321216269953462015-01-27T05:51:38.885-08:002015-01-27T05:51:38.885-08:00Nicely done, and LOVE the picture for this one. O...Nicely done, and LOVE the picture for this one. One minor constructive critique, I would have liked it if the text of this one had included a description of the shirt becoming smaller and tied-off. Or, more generally; you actually described the outfit in the previous part, and I think that the appeal of describing changes in clothing resonates more if you can see the changes in the same part.<br /><br />I think this might be a bit of a personal thing, as I quite like descriptions of clothes changing into a sexy outfit, and even though you mentioned the outfit in the previous part you didn't put much focus on it. But really, this is nitpicking; this entry is great. Keep up the awesome work! :DNickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05398590829658810063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7776443105995961774.post-57031374524878807462015-01-24T17:14:06.650-08:002015-01-24T17:14:06.650-08:00Thanks!
Next one will be even more so!Thanks!<br /><br />Next one will be even more so!The Planet of the APhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00033283755173425867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7776443105995961774.post-15273160760046185452015-01-24T11:05:02.177-08:002015-01-24T11:05:02.177-08:00Nice as always!
The transformation here was quite...Nice as always! <br />The transformation here was quite drastic Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7776443105995961774.post-71100430182269267132015-01-24T06:48:15.718-08:002015-01-24T06:48:15.718-08:00Love the visuals. great way to see the original st...Love the visuals. great way to see the original story. Keep up the awesome workAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7776443105995961774.post-56893324538484549672015-01-23T18:53:52.858-08:002015-01-23T18:53:52.858-08:00it happens. nice series.it happens. nice series.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7776443105995961774.post-40030820772133904582015-01-23T06:28:46.793-08:002015-01-23T06:28:46.793-08:00The picture is great but this is the same text fro...The picture is great but this is the same text from Part 11.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com