Wednesday, February 27, 2013

An Unexpected Date (Part 2)

When 4lice did the request, it was written in first person, so I decided to use that for this adaptation.

At first, I was going to do it just from the boy's perspective, as that's the point of view 4lice used in the request. But I decided to change the point of view around, like in here, where I used the little girl's, who is more of a secondary character but a neutral party to what's happening.

Previous story: Part 1

Follow ups: Part 3Part 4Part 5Part 6Part 7Part 8Part 9Epilogue

1 comment:

  1. Nices changes. Lily as the narrator is a very good idea.