When 4lice did the request, it was written in first person, so I decided to use that for this adaptation.
At first, I was going to do it just from the boy's perspective, as that's the point of view 4lice used in the request. But I decided to change the point of view around, like in here, where I used the little girl's, who is more of a secondary character but a neutral party to what's happening.
Previous story: Part 1
Follow ups: Part 3, Part 4, Part 5, Part 6, Part 7, Part 8, Part 9, Epilogue
Nices changes. Lily as the narrator is a very good idea.
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