Monday, July 22, 2013

The Night of the Strange Green Light (Part 30)


Previous stories: Part 1Part 2Part 3Part 4Part 5Part 6Part 7Part 8Part 9Part 10Part 11Part 12Part 13Part 14Part 15Part 16Part 17Part 18Part 19Part 20Part 21Part 22Part 23Part 24Part 25Part 26Part 27Part 28, Part 29

Follow up: Epilogue

4 comments:

  1. That was quite a wait for this last part.

    Were you working on that AR/AP project that you mentioned in a previous post? Can we get some idea on what exactly you're planning and/or when it be out?

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  2. AWWWW,I was hoping that wasn't the last part. How about a sequel where Jill realizes her growing up has been more then physical and she doesn't really fit in with little kids anymore,but at the same time,she's not really a 19 year old woman,either? That would be fascinating-especially if her friends make the same wish and she "mentors" them as they grow and grow into tall goddesses as well!

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  3. I agree with Andrew. I know it was in the original story but that was the worst part of the original story, and you've made other changes from that as well.

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  4. I wouldn't mind a sequel somewhere down the line; but I for one would prefer to see him move on to other stories now.

    Loved the expansion on this story, though. Great work! :D

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