Monday, April 10, 2017

Transfer

 Something brief which I enjoyed writing.

 


Follow up: Transfer II

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  1. Another excellent cap

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  2. I love it! Just as I expect, fantastic work again with an original idea! - bela04

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    1. Thank yo so much! It reminded me a bit of some of your work, Bela!

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  3. I love it! Just as I expect, fantastic work again with an original idea! - bela04

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  4. I really liked this one, such a great position to be in and really liked the setup for the spell!

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    1. Thank you! Just something quick that crossed my mind.

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  5. Well, that's one way to fix a wicked stepmother situation. Neat story.

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    1. Thanks. Yeah, this is kind of a revenge story, which I don't often do.

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  6. I missed some process description from you ^^
    Brief yet efective XD
    And I liked the twist of the story as well... a bit creepy but awesome on its own - apmaster

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    1. Thanks! Well, most of my stories get at least a bit of process description.

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    2. Yeah, but this was the first to have so after the inactivity gap...

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