This is actually a cute short story ^^ I like how she doesn't go full "sex-machine" on the guy unlike 90% stories of this kind and instead she reacts like mostly a normal person. It is a good ending, but not an asspull ending, good job
Thanks. I think that's because most stories are written by guys and they seem to think all of us become bimbos when we grow up and that our only goal in life is to bed a guy.
It's no feminism, but it'd be great if more female characters weren't portrayed as sex crazy in that many stories.
Loved it! As anon said, I liked how you made her worry about her relationship with her friend, something fresh. I also liked that you didn't specify the cause, makes it a bit more intriguing.
nice :D
ReplyDeleteGlad you approve. Expect a few of these short stories over the next days.
DeleteA short, but nice story.
ReplyDeleteI wanted to make a longer one, but since I couldn't, I figured these were better than nothing at all.
DeleteThis is actually a cute short story ^^
ReplyDeleteI like how she doesn't go full "sex-machine" on the guy unlike 90% stories of this kind and instead she reacts like mostly a normal person. It is a good ending, but not an asspull ending, good job
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Thanks. I think that's because most stories are written by guys and they seem to think all of us become bimbos when we grow up and that our only goal in life is to bed a guy.
DeleteIt's no feminism, but it'd be great if more female characters weren't portrayed as sex crazy in that many stories.
Thanks for noticing! :)
Loved it!
ReplyDeleteAs anon said, I liked how you made her worry about her relationship with her friend, something fresh.
I also liked that you didn't specify the cause, makes it a bit more intriguing.
Thank you. I normally explain the causes, but I felt this one didn't need them.
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