Thursday, November 7, 2013

Using the Medallion (Part 30)

Part 30 is a good place to end this, so here's the finale.


Previous story: Part 1Part 2Part 3Part 4Part 5Part 6Part 7Part 8Part 9Part 10Part 11, Part 12Part 13Part 14Part 15Part 16Part 17Part 18Part 19Part 20Part 21Part 22Part 23Part 24Part 25Part 26Part 27Part 28

5 comments:

  1. Was that final line Cole's thoughts or simply a statement of the fact that he should have given Maggie some love? If it's option A, it implies the beginning of redemption, so I think it's important to clarify this.

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    1. Yes, they regret what they did to her, but there-s no redemption there, because they only do it for egoistical reasons.

      They regret it because they had to pay for it, not because they sincerely feel they should have loved her.

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  2. really nice story,even if i prefer ap/ar based ones ;)

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    1. Well, I think this story revolved around those a lot. There was just a tiny use of TG at the end as a punishment for the antagonist characters, but the main one had two different kinds of AP.

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