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Was that final line Cole's thoughts or simply a statement of the fact that he should have given Maggie some love? If it's option A, it implies the beginning of redemption, so I think it's important to clarify this.
ReplyDeleteYes, they regret what they did to her, but there-s no redemption there, because they only do it for egoistical reasons.
DeleteThey regret it because they had to pay for it, not because they sincerely feel they should have loved her.
really nice story,even if i prefer ap/ar based ones ;)
ReplyDeleteWell, I think this story revolved around those a lot. There was just a tiny use of TG at the end as a punishment for the antagonist characters, but the main one had two different kinds of AP.
DeleteBrilliant, well done story.
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