That’ll Teach Her (Part 24)
Previous stories:
Part 1,
Part 2,
Part 3,
Part 4,
Part 5,
Part 6,
Part 7,
Part 8,
Part 9,
Part 10,
Part 11,
Part 12,
Part 13,
Part 14,
Part 15,
Part 16,
Part 17,
Part 18,
Part 19,
Part 20,
Part 21,
Part 22,
Part 23
Follow ups:
Part 25,
Part 26,
Part 27,
Part 28,
Part 29,
Part 30
Nice. You know, you've set up a perfectly good happy ending here if you let Mindy find out she actually ENJOYS being a sweet,good hearted amazon (in fact,you could actually make her grow even taller and curvier before the story ends,but that's just my personal preference) and the 2 sisters find a way to restore Monica to her real age without changing Mindy back. You could even give Monica a similar stature to her sister and have a REALLY happy ending.
ReplyDeleteJust some ideas. Keep up the good work,