An interesting take on the celestial bureaucracy. Sure does make more sense than kids going to the afterlife too early.
I know it's a sensitive story for some, not only because of personal beliefs, but also because it features children's deaths.But I needed to write this one and hopefully it won't offend anyone. I'm glad you found it interesting.
planning on doing a sequal on this story. is that ok?http://agetfcaptions.blogspot.com/2013/02/an-unexpected-date-part-1.html
Sure. What have you got planned?
I plan to do an alternative. In the end it was said nobody remembered the other reality where sally was the oldest and lilly was the youngest. I plan to do the story of Lilly and Julian growing up together.
How old was young Lilly anyway and how old was she after the age swap?
Okay, just give a link to your blog when you post it.
She becomes 20 after the swap, and she was about 6 originally.
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This I particularly liked!In AP stories I like a male and a female discover the pleasures of adulthood
Glad I could help. Got a lot of that in Premature Maturation. Did you read it?
As always, your creativity for new AP-centered scenarios and "enterprises" never ceases to amaze me ^^ - The AP Master
Thanks :)I get what you mean with entreprises. I guess that's part of my style. Glad you enjoy it.