Wednesday, July 16, 2014

12 things you should know about The Reversion

THE REVERSION INDEX


This informative slideshow was published in websites all over the world after the President's speech:














PS1: Dissapointed on the little response the Prologue got. I hope this one manages more comments, now that we're properly in-universe. What do you think of the "rules" I've set for the story. I think I've covered quite a good ground, but if you still have doubts, just tell me. It will be interesting to discuss, and surely will help me develop the chapters. So sound off bellow!

PS2: I strongly recommend reading all this story on the graphic shape I'm creating. It will be a more immersive experience that way, and helps build the universe a lot. But I know a few of you use translators, so I'm also posting this in text form:

WHAT DOES THE REVERSION DO ONCE IT HITS?
A quick walkthrough to what I’ve found so far

By Lena Underwood

It’s been 72 hours since the Reversion first appeared in my homeland and I can’t still believe what has happened. I can’t still believe everyone I know is now practically a completely different person. I can’t still believe even I have changed. I can’t believe I’m writing this from inside the body of an adult woman. I was writing my English homework when it happened, and now I’ve been asked by the President to write this so that the whole world can read it.

I won’t lie to you and tell you it will be easy for you when your turn comes. It won’t. But I hope to make it just a bit easier on you than it was on me by warning you about what can you expect. We were hit out of the blue. The pun wasn’t intended, but it all actually started with a blue flash lighting up the sky and a sound like a distant bombing.

So, here’s 12 facts you should be aware of before the Reversion affects you, mostly taken from personal experience:


1. The only living beings affected by the change are humans.
I’ve been unable to find any evidence of animals or plants changing its physiological age, as we humans did. Our old horse Hoofster is out there in his stable, still as decrepit as ever. Nobody’s dogs, cats, cattle or flowerbeds has been altered on the slightest. Whoever did this obviously designed it so that it could only get humans.

Inanimated objects have changed extensively, though, always in relation to our own transformations. More on that later.

Photo: Doug Lambert, who used to be a farmer, says all his animals were left completely intact by the Reversion.


2. Individuals between the ages of 0 and 5 will remain completely unchanged, but usually their health improves.
There’s only been one human exception to the age changes: those under the age of five. My little sister Sonia is still my little sister Sonia, thankfully. Still, her asthma, which has affected her since birth is seemingly gone.

It’s a curious thing that nobody appears to be sick on the island (which I’ll explain with more detail later), but even those apparently unchanged have changed in that respect.

Photo: Dewey Roberts is one of the lucky unaffected. While both his sister (pictured, formerly 6) and parents have transformed, he remains the same, as a reminder of the family’s past. 


3. Children between the ages of 5 and 15 will mature into 25 years old adults.
If you have kids under fifteen, make them ready for a sudden journey into adulthood and make yourself ready for them to take over. Those who are children today will be the ruling force of the world by tomorrow. Literally.

Luckily, none of us has progressed to any other age than twenty-five, which I can now say, is not a bad age to be. That means there is no old people around. Not even middle-aged ones.

Photo: Jeremy Brock (formerly 9) and his sister Doreen (formerly 12) are now both 25. Jeremy is an accountant and Doreen a successful status, but despite her knowledge and adult status, she still throws child-like tantrums when her brother beats her in a game.


4. People older than 15 will regress into 10 years old children.
No matter if you are just a teenager or a very aged person, the result will be always the same: you will become 10 years old. Both my brother, formerly sixteen, and my dear grandmother are now ten.

The result is that the streets look strangely uniform now, for everyone is either 10 or 25, with only the few children under five to break the monotony.

Photo: Pearl (left, formerly 63) and Cristina (right, formerly 37) sit with the unaffected Mandy and Cory (center). They used to be the children’s grandmother and mother, respectively, but they are now their sisters.


5. Unborn babies will be fine.
If a woman is pregnant at the time of the event, she will still regress into a 10 years old. The fetus won’t disappear, luckily. It will migrate into the body of one of the newly matured females.

In most cases, familiar relation seems to be a determinant factor on who will get the baby. My friend Robin was very excited to become an adult, until she discovered she was carrying her mother’s six weeks old baby.

Proximity also seems to apply. When there’s nobody in the immediate family able to assume the role. The Parks were living alone and when they both regressed into children, they were desperate, for Mrs. Park was with child and the baby was nowhere to be found. The girl living next door, though, became suddenly pregnant. Her fetus matches Mrs. Park exactly.

Photo: Karla Briggs aged into an adult along with the rest of her family, but after a few minutes she also became heavily pregnant a condition not shared by anyone in her house. The baby belonged to her next-door neighbor, Della Park.


6. The changes are mostly physical, but some are mental.
There’s a good deal of abilities and knowledge that we’ve exchanged since the transformation. But it’s not a complete transference.

We all keep our intact memories of who we were, but we’ve gained (or lost) intelligence and skills. Mostly, we’ve discovered those unexpectedly, when we need them.

For instance, I can now drive, though I had never done that before. I’m now a journalist and I can write and speak in ways I couldn’t when I was eight, though I’m completely surprised when I do. So are my former classmates, some of who are now lawyers, doctors or engineers.

The adults who until a few hours ago were those journalists, lawyers or doctors are now children, and though they remember doing those things, they don’t seem able to figure how any more.

It’s scary, for now we’re the ones in charge, but though we have the skills an intelligence, we lack the experience.

Photo: Besides knowledge, some habits characteristic of your new age group might also be developed. Obviously, Rosemary Hayes had never smoked a cigarette when she was a young girl, but she has developed an addiction after her transformation. “I get this cravings and I’ve smoked six packaged since that day. I also need a lot of coffee. I’m worried about what that can do for my health, but they say I’m better than ever. Still, it’s not like the old me. I even enjoy listening to music I had never even heard befire”, she told me.


7. Somehow, reality has warped to adapt to the changes.
Said transference of knowledge is accompanied by a transference of roles. For every regressed cop in the island, a former child has been transformed into one and taken his place. The same has happened with every other indispensable role in our town. Odd thing is that we’re all 25, a young age for most professionals in the former reality.

We’ve been granted every necessary requirement to try and fulfill those roles, but many new adults are still in their homes, scared to perform their new duties. This can’t happen when the event goes global.

Photo: Mae Snyder was the previous Chief Editor of the newspaper. When I interviewed her, though, it was obvious she is now unable to perform that work, at least for the time being. It was clear, however, that she hadn’t forgotten how to use colorful words, when she thoroughly expressed her opinion on the fact that a “blonde bimbo playing dress-up” had replaced her.


8. The reality change also blends family roles.
Generally, former parents become the children of one of their own descendants.

Luckily for me, my brother Frankie has assumed that role. He’s become the father of our former parents and my grandmother (all of whom are now siblings). That means I’m my mother’s aunt… It all gets very confusing at first, but it all makes sense in the end.

It’s not uncommon that these new families are formed by unrelated people, though. In our very own case, we’ve added a new member, Nora Bell, who used to be our teenaged babysitter and who is now Frankie’s wife. Luckily my parents liked her, for she’s now their mother.

As you can see with Frankie and Nora, romantic pairings have been suddenly created between some of the new adults. I don’t seem to be involved in any kind of relationship (because of my work, maybe?), but lots of former kids are discovering love for the first time. For what I’ve seen, there seems to be genuine attraction and chemistry in most of those couples.

Photo: My coworker Cesar Tucker discovered he was engaged to Harriet Schwartz, whom he used to bully at school. Now, they’re very much into each other, and decided to carry on their wedding yesterday.


9. Everyone is healthier.
At first, it was believed that regressing and progressing is the only effect of The Reversion, but some theorize that the human race has improved and gotten healthier thanks to it.

Al Roberson, a former grocer, told me he was severely obese since his childhood, but now that he has regressed to it, he is a very fit kid. And, in truth, all new children look beautiful.

The same is noticeable among the new men and women, most of which sport fairly attractive and strong bodies. At risk of sounding immodest, I think I’ve grown to be rather pretty, but as a young girl my teeth were quite uneven and crooked. They’re perfect now.


Photo: Busty or fit females were never present in their family, but now that they’re adults, the three Goodman sisters (Jana pictured) are in a rather incredible shape.


10. Not everybody gets affected at the same time once the event takes place.
Some change right away, while others might last over ten minutes without showing any symptom.

I was alone in my room when I heard screams. When I came out, My father was already completely changed and Frankie was becoming a man. When we was finished, my grandmother started. I didn’t feel anything until after five minutes later. My mother was the last to change, starting around the time I was reaching puberty.

Photo: In this picture, taken during the actual event, Evelyn Phelps, formerly 13 and already fully transformed, tries to explain what just happened to her to her confused father. He wouldn’t start his own transformation until almost the end of the Reversion.


11. After it begins, the transformation process takes about three minutes in being completed.
That’s alarmingly fast if you, like me, have to double your height in that time, but it feels far longer than it really is. You will feel every little change as if it was happening in slow motion, and you’ll probably be scared and wanting it to stop. I tell you, don’t be. If we can’t stop this, then we should embrace it. Try and enjoy the sensation. It isn’t painful at all, and if odd, it is a rather pleasant feeling, similar to stretching after waking up. That’s how I would describe it, and my fellow victims have used very similar explanations.

Photo: “All my body felt tremendously alive. It was sort of like an electric shock, but it felt very good. And there was a trill inside, like being on a rollercoaster, but stronger. I’ve only felt close to that once again”, told me Beatrice Garrett when I interviewed her, but she didn’t want to share when she had that other experience.


12. The reality warp doesn’t only affect the bodies and minds of humans, but also their belongings.
Most of our things have become better suited for our new ages (clothes, documents), or exchanged owners (bedrooms, cars).

Be advised. This change doesn’t take place immediately, but rather about 15 minutes after the first one, once everybody’s physical transformations have finished.

My recommendation, especially if you’re about to age up is mind the clothing. I’ll tell you, and this is a personal testimonial, that it isn’t the best of ideas to be wearing a shirt made for an 8 years old while you mature into a 25 years old body. If the situation ensues, though, simply don’t panic: it will fix itself in a few minutes. My clothes not only became the right size, but even much more fashionable and definitely not childlike. I even got the proper underwear, so don’t worry. You won’t have to buy anything.


Photo: May Green is very proud of the shoe collection that suddenly appeared on her house. Her formerly older sister Sadie, who never had such a quantity, loves to play with them.

Monday, July 14, 2014

THE REVERSION - Foreword and Prologue

FOREWORD

Today, a new stage begins for this blog, and it’s, at least for me, the most exciting one by far. I’ve tried to do it before by asking for help, but I haven’t been successful. Therefore, I’ve decided it is time to try it by myself.

It’s no secret for the reader that my captions blog differs a lot in style to most. While mine might not be one of the best, I can say shortly that the difference is that other captioner match their images with a few lines of text, while I match many lines of text with a few images. This is made evident by the many parts I usually need to do to tell the whole story, with some series reaching up to 30 parts.

The reason I do this is that I feel a need to tell more to the story than just a few lines. I need to know a bit of the characters, of their backstories previous to whatever happens to them and of their ultimate fates and reactions once it finally does.

Thus, I’ve decided to revise this blog’s name. I’ve decided that what I do here aren’t “captions” as much as “photostories”, and I believe our new name should reflect that.

So, what a better way to start under our new title than by posting our very first proper story?

For months I’ve been saying I have many interesting stories to tell that are far beyond what I can do with captions. The only problem I face is my poor use of the English language, which is why I was asking for help. As said help didn’t come (or disappeared after a few conversations), I’ve decided to face the problem and write what I can. After all, I’ve seen stories written by people who obviously can’t master the language any better than I can.

Back when I was looking for help, I wrote several story treatments to be developed by the potential authors. I think six of them are quite interesting, and I’ve decided to develop one of them in the format they were intended to be written: not as captions but as a short novel. The story, called The Reversion, appealed to me because of its epic scale and diverse characters and situations.

So today I’m posting a rather short Prologue. Of all chapters I’ll post, this is the only one made with the collaboration of another author. In this case, a reader by the name of Odd-Ranger, offered to help me with the story. He wrote the Prologue I had suggested (and which I have now revised a little) but then I wasn’t able to find him again, so I’m undertaking the rest of the story by myself.

And if you can spare a little time in leaving a comment, asking a question or pointing a mistake in the text, PLEASE do it. This is a mammoth of a project, and I can only undertake it if I feel it’s getting a response.

So, without any more delay, here you have




The Reversion

by Planet





Stand by for an Emergency Broadcast, from the President of the United States.



Good evening, ladies and gentlemen. I come before you, with news of what might be the greatest threat the world has ever known. What I'm about to tell you, you may find unbelievable. You may find yourself thinking this is an elaborate hoax. But I assure you, it is very real, and soon it will impact upon the lives of you, your neighbours, your family, and every citizen you know and care about.

By now, a few of you might be aware of a story released yesterday in the sensationalist media. The story claimed that, three days ago, a small and scarcely populated island in the Bahamas was, suddenly and inexplicably, struck with a flash of blue light. When the army was sent from Florida to investigate, they found the entire populace had seemingly been replaced, fellow soldiers included. When questioned, any adults present claimed that they were actually children and teenagers, and that the under aged inhabitants were, in fact, the adults.

I...can now confirm...we have had these adults and children tested, and their genetic codes match the records of the island's citizens perfectly. As bizarre as it sounds, we must assume that these people are, in fact, the inhabitants of the island… transformed.


Now… There is also...there is also another development that happened today. In the early hours, the White House received a letter. The Pentagon has been unable to trace it, but it turns out most leaders of the world have received a copy. We’ve been in permanent contact with them and we’ve arrived to the conclusion each of us should make the contents of the letter known to our people. As I speak, my colleagues are doing the same in their homelands.

I won’t delay this further… The message reads as follows:


Hello, mister president. Did you enjoy our handiwork yesterday? I know that you were watching. I know you might not believe your eyes right now, but believe this: What happened on that island was just a taste of what was to come. A little drop of water, before a typhoon hits. The power at our fingers is far beyond what the bloated, ignorant, self-righteous neck-beards of your systems could possibly understand, or attempt to halt. It is the perfect tool for correcting this stagnant, corrupted Earth of ours.

And that is exactly what it will do. This very evening, we will use our energy to reform all countries, everywhere; to turn them inside out, and create a new world. A world where the children need not learn lessons of idiocy from their closed minded elders. A world where every man and woman can have their mistakes erased, and will be able to begin anew. A world where all of humanity will emerge strong, beautiful, and better than before. This is not a tall story. This is not a mere empty threat. This is going to happen, and no one can stop it, nor should they try. It will begin tonight, at 10:40 EDT.

Make sure the people are ready.


My fellow Americans... My fellow Citizens of the World. All I can tell you is that I wish we were making this up. I wish this was all just some elaborate hoax. But the evidence we have taken from the incident in the Bahamas cannot be ignored. Therefore, we must now treat this...this insane warning with all the seriousness of threats received in the past.

I'm afraid, with the limited timespan, that we don't have long enough to find a way of preventing or curing this 'Reversion', as Miss Underwood has been calling it. All that I can recommend, at this time, is for everyone to return to their homes, to find somewhere safe for you and your loved ones, and to try and stay calm for what is to come, and to help send this message to everyone who might be still uninformed.

We’ve also decided to make al of Lena Underwood’s reports public, so that all of you can know exactly what to expect. Though by now she has collected hundreds of images and dozens of testimonials, which most of you won’t be able to read timely right now, she has put together, with her usual thoughtfulness, a quick guide of the main effects recorded on her island.

Rest assured, everyone else on the planet will be facing the same peril as you, and that no matter what happens, we will find a way to go on. God bless, America. God bless the World.



THE REVERSION - Index

THE REVERSION
-Foreword
-Prologue
-12 things you should know about The Reversion

PART I - Washington
-Chapter 1
-Chapter 2
-Chapter 3
-Chapter 4
-Chapter 5
-Chapter 6
-Chapter 7
-Chapter 8

PART II - Paris
-Chapter 1
-Chapter 2


Extra stories:
-A Few Reversed Lives (collaboration with bela04)

Sunday, July 13, 2014

The First Time (Part 8)

This was always meant to be a short run, so here's the finale.

By the way, decided to leave it up to your interpretation if they did or didn't do it. I know the real answer, but the story doesn't reveal it so that you can decide.

Also, as I've been saying, tomorrow will begin a new era for the blog. Be advised, we'll change our name to Age TF Photostories, but you'll probably still find it as you usually do.



Previous stories: Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5, Part 6, Part 7

Saturday, July 12, 2014

The First Time (Part 7)

I'll wrap this one up tomorrow and then to the next thing, which will be HUGE.

 

Previous stories: Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5, Part 6 

Follow ups: Part 8

Thursday, July 10, 2014

The First Time (Part 5)

This one's almost over. Then we'll have something very interesting coming to the blog.


Previous story: Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4

Follow ups: Part 6, Part 7, Part 8

Tuesday, July 8, 2014

The First Time (Part 4)

Note: I just did something I had never done before: I changed the picture for the first part. I don't know, but I never felt the previous one was the right one.



Previous story: Part 1, Part 2, Part 3

Follow ups: Part 5, Part 6, Part 7, Part 8