Premature Vengence
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Showing posts with label Voluntary. Show all posts
Sunday, June 25, 2017
Premature Vengence by A.P. Jones
Another great piece of artwork by A.P. Jones. I really like this concept. I'd love for him to write an excerpt of the transformation part of this novel.
Monday, June 12, 2017
Premature Maturation Unused Gallery
As you know, Premature Maturation was my longest story. During the planning process, it was even longer, and there were many plotlines and parts that weren't developed because I ultimately deemed them unnecessary.
But I had tons of pictures that I was going to use in those "deleted scenes", or that didn't fit very well with what I ended up writing, and so never made the final cut. I was about to sent them all to the trash, but I decided to share them with you.
There's no new narrative at all here. This is just a gallery with pictures of the main characters, and as such you might find them interesting. Remember that in the context of the story, Tanya (the blonde), Felicia (the black-haired one) and Joy (the one with chestnut hair) are three preteens who mess around with a book of spells and end up in mature bodies during one crazy day. So look at the pictures with that in mind and you can imagine further adventures that I'm definetely not writing :P
You can read the actual story here.
Thursday, June 8, 2017
Sweet Tooth by BLZBub
BLZBub gave us a story!
Sweet Tooth
by BLZBub.
Ame was a very cute little girl. Everyone who knew
here said she was as sweet as sugar. Her parents were very proud to have
such a cheerful daughter. Her only really flaw is that she had an
irresistible sweet tooth. She was very rarely
seen without something sweet in her hands. And if she wasn’t eating
something, she’d be asking for someone to get her something sugary and
yummy. But at least her childhood metabolism allowed her to not get too
fat with all the sugar she ate. And it made it
easy for babysitters to bribe her into calming down.
Milo was a very frequent babysitter for Ame. She
was such a delightful girl, always happy and easy to please. He watched
over her as often as he could not just because her parents paid good
money, but Ame was fun to be around. In turn,
Ame liked Milo out of all his babysitters because he did more than gave
her sweets. He took her to fun places like the zoo, the aquarium, the
movies, and the fair.
It was this year’s trip to the fair when everything
changed. Milo had noticed that there were a lot more booths than usual
this year. Ame wanted to see all the booths so Milo gave her some money
and allowed her to wander off. He wasn’t
too worried because Ame was smarter than she looked and she knew to
meet him at the right time. Milo just hoped she didn’t buy so many
sweets that she ended up with a stomachache.
It was very much to Milo’s surprise when Ame came
back with just a lollipop. Of course, it was a big old-timey lollipop,
but Milo would have expected her to get more than just that. “How much
did that lollipop cost?” asked Milo, thinking
Ame just went for the most expensive candy.
“Not that much, I got your change,” said Ame, handing Milo back his money. To his greater surprise, he was missing only $3.
“Why only get that lollipop?” asked Milo.
“It was the only thing I wanted,” said Ame, “Plus
the lady says its magic would work better if I didn’t have much else in
my tummy.”
Milo just shook his head in amusement. Obviously,
the woman who sold her that lollipop was trying to make sure that Ame
didn’t pig out and make herself sick. “So, you gonna eat that now?” he
asked.
“I’ll wait until we’re home,” said Ame. This
surprised Milo quite a bit. Normally, Ame couldn’t wait to start eating
any treat she had. Well, it’s probably a good thing for her to use
self-control.
Once they got back home, Milo started working on
making a healthy lunch for the two of them. Ame was a growing girl and
she needed to eat better than all that sugary stuff. He just hoped that
she would be willing to put up with it, but
her self-control at the fair seemed promising.
When lunch was ready, he walked up to her room and
knocked on the door. “Ame, you ready for lunch?” Ame didn’t reply so he
knocked a little louder. Eventually, he heard a voice in there, making
light moaning and giggling. But that didn’t
sound like Ame’s voice at all. With that, Milo opened the door.
Instead of finding a cute little girl, a beautiful
young woman on Ame’s bed. And yet Milo didn’t freak out and assumed she
had kidnapped Ame. Despite how illogical it seemed, it appeared the
woman
was Ame. Perhaps it was the fact that she was licking the
lollipop that Ame had got at the fair. Maybe it was because she was
wearing Ame’s clothes though they were obviously too small to cover her
hot body. But it was most likely because her face still
looked like Ame’s, albeit more mature.
“Ame?” asked Milo in surprise.
The woman smiled at Milo and asked, “Do I look pretty now, Milo?” Her voice was different, but it still had Ame’s childish tone.
“Ame, how did this happen?” asked Milo.
Ame took one more lick of the lollipop before saying, “I told you this thing was magic.”
Milo was still trying to grasp that this was really
happening. But deciding to just go with it for now, he asked, “What
kind of magic is that lollipop?”
“The lady who sold me it said it would give me what I wanted most,” said Ame before taking another lick.
“And what does becoming an adult have to do with that?” asked Milo.
Ame thought it over before shrugging and saying, “I dunno.”
Milo sighed. It was clear that while Ame had the
body of an adult, she still had the mind of a child. “I’ll go get your
lunch. Just stay here until we figure what to do.”
“Whatever you say,” said Ame before taking another lick.
Milo went back downstairs to grab Ame’s plate. He
paused a moment before adding more to her lunch. A grown woman would
need to eat more than a little girl after all. Once he was done, he
brought the plate back up to Ame’s room.
Ame’s room had changed a lot during that brief time
that Milo was downstairs. Instead of looking like it belong to a little
girl, it looked like it belonged to a teenager. Instead of posters of
kittens and puppies, there were posters of
boybands. Her cute little wardrobe was replaced with a larger one that
had a wider amount of clothes. There was also a desk that was cluttered
with magazines, makeup, books, and other things.
Instead of being on the bed, Ame was on the floor.
Her ill-fitting clothes had been replaced with a bathrobe, although it
was short enough to show all of her curvy legs. Instead of licking her
lollipop, Ame was swiping on a cellphone.
“Ame, what happened to your room?” asked Milo.
Ame gave him a smile and said, “I like what
happened to it. All that stuff that was here was too kiddy.” Her voice
hadn’t changed, but her tone sounded more mature.
“Where’s that lollipop?” asked Milo. He hoped he’d
able to see where that lollipop was made so he could figure out a way to
fix this mess.
“I ate it. Didn’t take as long as I thought it
would. I just hope all that sugar doesn’t ruin my teeth. I would not
look forward to fillings,” said Ame. It was pretty clear that Ame’s mind
was starting to catch up with her body. She wasn’t
fully mature, her mentality being that of a teenager.
“So why are you on the floor?” asked Milo, glancing over at the bed which was bigger than it was before.
“I just wanted to do some Pilates,” said Ame, stretching out her long bare legs.
Milo’s face quickly turned red and he closed the
door. He tried to clear his mind. He shouldn’t be thinking about Ame
that way. She was still a little girl even if she had the mind of a
teenager and the body of a woman. What would her parents
think if they knew Milo was staring at their daughter like that? What
would they think when they see their little is a lot older than when
they last saw her? Milo had to keep his head straight. He needed to find
out who sold Ame that lollipop and then how
to reverse. Taking a deep breath, he opened the door again.
Ame’s room had changed once again. All the teenage
clutter was gone, the boyband posters replaced with framed photos, the
desk had the books stacked neatly and a laptop on it. Ame was back on
her bed, wearing less than before. Instead of
a bathrobe, she was lying their in her bra and panties, revealing most
of her curvy body. Milo could see that her belly button was pierced,
which he was pretty certain wasn’t before.
“Hi, Milo,” said Ame in a coy tone, “Do you like what you see?”
“Ame…” sputtered Milo. It took all of his effort to
not let his eyes go down her mature body. “Why did you take your
clothes off?” he eventually manage to say.
“It was getting kinda warm,” said Ame, “Besides, I wanted to take a good look at my body. I grew up nicely, didn’t I?”
Mile didn’t think his face could get any more flushed that it was now. “Uh, I need to go…take care of something,” he stammered.
“Milo, wait,” called Ame. Milo paused and looked
Ame in the eyes. This time, she didn’t look like she was teasing. It
looked like she was trying to be sincere. “Milo, there’s something that
you should know, something that I’ve just figured
out,” said Ame.
Ame’s tone did sound like she was trying to be
honest. Apparently, her mind had matured enough to match her body. “So
what is it?” asked Milo.
“The woman who gave my that lollipop told me it
would give me what I wanted most,” said Ame, “When I bought it, I
thought it would mean that I would get an extra big cake or maybe a
unicorn. I didn’t know why I turned into an adult at first,
but now it’s starting to make sense.” She gave Milo a hopeful look and
said, “The thing I want most is you.”
“Me?” asked Milo.
“Yes, you’re the closest person to me besides my
parents. You do so more for me than any other babysitters. I suppose on a
subconscious level, what I wanted most was to be your best friend,”
said Ame.
“But you already were my best friend,” said Milo softly.
Ame gave a small chuckle and said, “Could you
really be that close to a little girl? There was a big age gap between
us and the magic closed it up. I was just giddy being big at first but
as I became more mature, I realized that I wanted
more than to be your friend. Milo, I think I’ve fallen in love with
you.”
Milo was shocked, but he couldn’t deny he felt a
warming feeling in his heart. Ame was so beautiful now and she seemed so
earnest and sincere. But still, his brain tried to remind him what was
right. “It wouldn’t be right,” he said, “You’re
still a young girl.”
“No, I’m not,” said Ame, “Look at me, Milo. I am a
woman in body and mind. And I want to be with you. More than anything
I’ve ever wanted before. Please tell me I didn’t grow up for nothing.”
Milo hesitated for a moment, but here was a
beautiful young woman who was willing to give her heart to him. He had
been turned down in the past so maybe it was making him more open to
persuasion. And he had to admit he was very close to
Ame and her adult self seemed like the woman of his dreams. “I think we
can give this a try,” he said as he approached the bed.
Ame smiled before sitting up and kissing him. She
was a pretty good kisser, Milo had to admit. But this was as forward as
he was going to go, until he knew for certain if this magic was
permanent.
Finding the woman at the fair who sold Ame the
lollipop was harder than Milo had expected. He thought he would have to
return the next day when Ame’s parents returned. To Milo’s great
surprise, they didn’t find anything wrong about their
young daughter growing up while they were away. In fact, they didn’t
even see her as a daughter, but as a younger cousin.
Bizarrely, Ame was able to collaborate their story.
It seemed a whole new life of memories were at her disposal. Now she
was a college girl who was rooming with her cousins so she wouldn’t have
to pay the steep boarding process at her campus.
Ame turned out to be a lot smarter and knowledgeable than Milo would
have expected.
It took little persuasion on Ame’s part for Milo to
give up his search for the lollipop seller. After all, Milo had a
smoking hot girlfriend who was legally an adult and had a great
personality. It also turned out that Ame retained her
high metabolism and could nearly all that she wanted without loosing
her tight curves.
Milo and Ame went out on a lot of dates from then
on. The movies, the beach, the boardwalk, every place was a fun time for
them. But every time they went out, Ame insisted they got ice cream.
She still had a bit of a sweet tooth.
Tuesday, June 6, 2017
Buxomize by A.P. Jones
Our reader A.P. Jones sent us a couple of interesting artworks in the vein of the Vintage Comics. There's more to come.
Thank you very much!
Thank you very much!
Buxomize
by A.P. Jones.
Thursday, June 1, 2017
Monday, May 29, 2017
Halloween Party (Finale)
I've always received a lot of comments about this series, probably more than any other. I've been asked once and again if I would ever do another part, or if I would finish it before leaving the blog for good.
I decided to reward that by actually ending a story that I never intended to finish in the first place. But now that I've done, it's OVER. There's no future Halloween Party captions coming out. This is it, really.
I decided to reward that by actually ending a story that I never intended to finish in the first place. But now that I've done, it's OVER. There's no future Halloween Party captions coming out. This is it, really.
Sunday, May 28, 2017
Vintage Comics - Issue 7
Ok, this isn't a comic, but rather a vintage cover for one of those "titillating" romance novels. A completely different period than the comics, but you get why I did it.
I had a lot of fun tackling the stereotypes from this genre, even though it was the most difficult one I've done. This wasn't just changing the text like I've done in some of the others. This was build from scratch... the aged texture and everything. I hope you appreciate the result.
I had a lot of fun tackling the stereotypes from this genre, even though it was the most difficult one I've done. This wasn't just changing the text like I've done in some of the others. This was build from scratch... the aged texture and everything. I hope you appreciate the result.
Wednesday, May 24, 2017
Vintage Comics - Issue 6
Miss those melodramatic crying girls from old comic books? Here's another one!
By the way, the Vintage Comics have their own label.
By the way, the Vintage Comics have their own label.
Tuesday, May 23, 2017
Vintage Comics - Issue 4
I really like this one, though maybe it's just because the edit took a lot of effort. You're welcome to dislike it, though.
Wednesday, May 17, 2017
Father's Day
A sequel to Sunday's story. Since I don't think I'll be able to post it by Father's Day, I decided to do it ahead of time.
Previous story: Mother's Day
Previous story: Mother's Day
Saturday, May 6, 2017
Wednesday, May 3, 2017
Up the Elevator
Sorry about the text size. It was the only way it would fit. Open it on a different window to see it bigger.
Please comment. If you make me happy enough, I'll write a particularly sizable story (not just a caption) for the last day of the week, with a very nice and detailed transformation process.
Please comment. If you make me happy enough, I'll write a particularly sizable story (not just a caption) for the last day of the week, with a very nice and detailed transformation process.
Tuesday, May 2, 2017
Transfer II
A brief sequel to Transfer (click to read the first one).
By the way, I'll try to post a story every day of the week, but ONLY if you comment.
By the way, I'll try to post a story every day of the week, but ONLY if you comment.
Wednesday, April 19, 2017
Premature Maturation - Epilogue
It was a fun and very long journey. The complete story is 141 pages long. Quite a feat for me, if I can say so myself.
I want to thank BLZBub again for helping me with the typos (my English isn't quite there yet), and also to all the readers who followed the full narrative, especially those who took a short time to leave me at least a comment at some point. That really encouraged me. Planning a story like this is time consuming, and when you don't have any feedback, it becomes frustrating too.
So I hope you could leave me a line or two now that the story has been completed. Tell me what you think of what I did, even if they're negative (but polite) comments. Did you like what I wrote? Was a plotpoint confusing or you think I left it open? Want to know something else about these character's universe? Did you like the pictures?
By the way, maybe you've noticed that one of our newest additions to the "cast" (female Jenkins) is a girl who has been used extensively in this blog before. Do you remember how many characters she has "played" over my stories? I don't, but she's certainly the most used of all models here. I always say I won't use her any more, but then she pops up again!
On other news, my next story won't be published on this blog. It's an exciting collaboration with another author and I hope it'll be great. I'lll tell you when and how to find it once it's finished.
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Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Sunday
– 12:20 am.
“RUN! Inside!” roared
David when their cab pulled in front of Joy’s house. He’d thrown the money to
the offended driver without any delay, and all four of them were sprinting
towards the door as fast as their tired legs could.
Traffic hadn’t
been kind with them on their trip. But now they were there; if they didn’t make
it, it would be by a matter of just seconds…
They all sat on
the floor around the table except for Tanya, who ran to the kitchen to fetch
some matches.
Felicia put her
reading glasses on and she grabbed the paper with the translated spell from
within the book. She sighed.
And as Tanya
came back and started lighting the candles, Felicia shamelessly cupped her
generous breasts.
“Bye, girls. You
were awesome,” she said to her chest.
The others
chuckled nervously, but then Joy and Tanya imitated her, clenching their curves
one last time.
As for David,
who had removed his bloody shirt, he flexed his humongous arms, feeling his large
muscles contract. He looked down at his chiseled torso, and felt the tightness
on his crotch. He would also miss it all, but he knew he would grow back in
time.
“Let’s do it, we
just have a minute!” said Joy, looking at the clock.
Felicia
straightened her glasses and picked up the spell again, but then she looked at
Tanya.
“Can you read it
this time? I just…”
Tanya looked
suspiciously at her friend, but she took the paper. She was about to start
reading when she also put it down.
“I… I don’t
think I want to do this,” she announced.
“What? This is
not the time for joking, Tanya!” say Joy desperately.
“I’m not. I
really want to stay like this.”
“But why?”
“Look at me!
Think of what I could do if I could be like this forever. I’m gorgeous, I’m an
adult… I… I could…”
Joy wouldn’t
have expected it from the docile Tanya, but Felicia and David knew exactly what
she really was going on about.
“It’s just…
Okay, I think I could confront my parents, let them see me like this,” Tanya
admitted. “I’d let them know I’m a woman now, and that I’m living by myself
from now on, and see if I care about their stupid divorce!”
Her blue eyes
were a bit wet. But then she bowed her head and David took her hand.
“It’s going to
be okay. We’re going to be with you,” he said.
Tanya nodded and
then, with her free hand, she grabbed Felicia’s. Joy closed the chain hastily.
“Remember you
have to say the ages you’ll become as I finish the incantation,” said Tanya as
if nothing had happened.
And with no
further delay, she began chanting in the strange language, finishing with a
timid “12” in English.
“12”, repeated
David, and he pressed her hand a little.
“15”, said Joy.
“13” finished
Felicia.
“What!” said
David, looking at his sister in confusion.
“But you are
11!” yelled Tanya.
“Yeah, well, I
thought I’d skip ahead a bit,” shrugged Felicia as the wind engulfed them all.
“But… What will
Mom say?” worried David. He now understood why his sister hadn’t spoken at all
when Tanya had voiced her own doubts.
But then their
minds were taken away from Felicia’s mishap, because they started changing. All
of them started shrinking, but the most noticeable of them all was David, large
as he had become.
His physique was
subduing every second, as he lost an incredible amount of body mass very
quickly: he was going from 200 pound of pure muscle to his regular 60 pounds.
Tanya smiled at
him sweetly. She also looked much younger, but still strikingly beautiful. Her
face was losing her mature sexiness, and she was being rendered into a cute
teenaged girl. Her body was still quite amazing; tough it also started to
become softer, her curves giving place to a slender, flat frame.
David couldn’t
take his eyes away from her transformation, though his arousal started to
placate. At first it thought it was because of her regression to childhood, but
then he realized it was because of his
own. His large manhood was getting much smaller, and it wouldn’t be long before
it would become his boyhood again.
Joy hadn’t
changed dramatically so far, and she still looked almost like her adult version
as she crawled on all fours, but then she also started going back to her
regular, late-bloomer, 15-years-old self. Not that it worried her much since
she now knew development was just around the corner for her.
They had let go
out of each other's hands to concentrate on their own metamorphosis. David’s now
not-so large hand felt his face, no longer as virile and square. His short
beard was being absorbed back by his cheeks, and his Adam’s apple was likewise retreating.
He tested his voice with a long “Aaaaaaaaaah” that went from low and manly to
high-pitched. Tanya’s childish laughter joined his.
Meanwhile,
Felicia was also diminishing, though she wondered when she would stop. She
would after all be a full two years older than her original age, and she wasn’t
sure how further developed she would be.
She had also shrunk
a lot, but she still wasn’t the petite girl she had started as. Her very
womanly attributes were melting down, though. Her round and large breasts
suddenly sucked into her chest, knocking her back a couple of inches with its
sheer force and leaving nothing behind. They had come to be an important part
of who she had been for the last day, and she felt incomplete without them. Her
muscle tone and hips also withdrew.
David was now
much shorter than her. Gone was the 6’4’’ towering man, replaced by the
12-years-old brother she was used to. Next to them, Tanya was also back to her
sweet, pretty self, though she didn’t look so prim at the moment with her messy
hair and too large clothes. Joy had also just finished her transition to 15.
“Sis?” asked
David looking at her with wonder. All of them were. “Are you not… changing anymore?”
“No, I think
this is it. I must be 13 now,” said Felicia, and her voice surprised her. It
wasn’t womanly any more, but it sounded throatier than her former one.
“You’re… tall.”
It was true. Felicia
was now about a head taller than before. She was even slightly bigger than her
15-years-old babysitter.
“I gotta see!”
she said, and she ran to the bathroom.
She gasped. It
was more than her height and voice. Her face had cracked back to childhood, but
she still looked much different from before. She liked it. She felt pretty,
especially with her now longer hair.
Felicia’s mature appearance was increased by the womanly
makeup and clothes she was still wearing. She took off her now baggy blouse.
Gone. Where massive orbs had just stood, now there wasn’t more than a slightly
tender area. It couldn’t be seen, but she felt it was puffier than before, and
she knew what it meant. Her breasts would return in a matter of months, and if
her first transformation was any indication, they would get real big, real
fast. Her longer legs were surprisingly toned, and her backside was just a bit
swollen.
She blushed as
she looked down her underpants. She didn’t have her adult privates any more, but
neither were they completely back to childhood. Her transition into womanhood
had already started.
Pleased with
what she had seen, she went back to the living room, and she wasn’t surprised
when she saw Tanya had already brushed her hair and changed into proper
clothing. David also had a shirt that covered his skinny body and was wiping
the blood from his face.
“It’s just a
trace. My nose isn’t broken any more. I guess the regression did that.”
“Yeah, I’m not
as bruised either,” said Joy happily, then she yawned. “I’m quite beat,
though.”
“What are you
going to do, Felicia?” asked Tanya worriedly. “You look very different.”
The new
13-years-old shrugged.
“Mom will
probably want some explaining, but this was my choice.”
“You always have
to choose trouble,” said David shaking his head.
“It could have
been worse.”
“Well, it will
be worse for me,” said Joy sadly. “When my Mom finds out…”
“What will she
find out?” said Tanya, who had just thrown the consumed candles away. “We left
the house exactly as it was!”
“Yeah,
everything except one thing,” pointed Joy. “We kinda… spent all of her
emergency money. She’ll know I took it.”
“Oh, no!” David
and Tanya both looked very frightened.
Felicia laughed,
tough.
“She’ll be
confused all right,” she said. “When she realizes she has more money than
before.”
Felicia put one
hand inside her now useless 30H cup bra, which hung loose on her shoulders like
a bag. When she took her fingers out, she had quite an enormous pack of bills
in her fist.
“What? Where did
you get that?” Joy couldn’t believe it.
“We’ll have to
put you up to speed later. We had a few adventures of our own while we looked
for you. One of them involved robbing a casino. We had to give the money to this
mafia boss, but there was a shootout and…”
“But you had to
leave that bag behind! We told you to leave it!” exclaimed David.
“Yeah, but you
didn’t think I wouldn’t grab quite a handful, uhm? I put it in my cleavage and
had it all the time.”
Joy wanted to
hug her, but she instead took the money and ran to hide it back on its place,
for the sound and lights of a car had filled the living room that very moment.
Their mothers were back.
“Well… I better
leave all the explaining for tomorrow,” said Felicia, and she scurried away,
after saying. “Just tell them I was too tired.”
David and Tanya
were left alone. They looked at each other and the door opened.
The two women
looked very un-motherly in their dresses. It was also very obvious they had
partied quite hard.
“David!” his
mother shrieked, embracing her son. “We’re here.”
“I’m glad, Mom.
We’re all right. Felicia wanted to say hi, but she fell asleep.”
“You all should
have. It’s quite late…”
“Oh, leave them
be, Hilary. They’re quite big,” said Monica. “Oh, hi, Joy. How did they
behave?”
“Hello, Mom!” said Joy, returning to the
living room with an air of guiltlessness. Then she adopted her best babysitting
voice. “I’m sorry, Mrs. Hilary. I tried to put them all to sleep, but they
wanted to greet you. Otherwise, they were just little angels.”
Tanya giggled,
and then she yawned.
“Go to bed now,
then. Monica and I are beat too,” said Hilary.
“That I can
believe,” said Joy. “Bye, kids,” she told David and Tanya, and then she winked
at them before going straight for her bedroom.
The two mothers
also said their good nights and ran to their own rooms.
Tanya and David
were left alone yet again.
“So… Are you
okay?”
Tanya nodded.
“I’m sorry about
that. I just got caught in the excitement. The possibilities of being a grownup
for good. But I would have never done it,” she guaranteed, then she added: “I’m
not Felicia.”
“I know.”
David gulped.
Now that he wasn’t a sack of testosterone any more, his self-doubts were creeping
back. But not fully yet, so he dared to voice what he wanted to say.
“Despite
everything that happened… I had a fun time with you today.”
He blushed, but
looked straight at her eyes.
“So did I,” she
said, and she kissed him sweetly and innocently on his lips, before starting to
the room she shared with Felicia.
And though they
had kissed before as man and woman, right then he felt like any boy who just
had his first kiss with his crush.
He walked
happily to his bed, and he believed all the excitement wouldn’t let him sleep.
But he was simply too exhausted. He dozed off as instantly as everyone else in
the house.
Tuesday
– 9:07 am.
Mrs. Hilary packed
her things into her bag. She, her children Felicia and David, and their friend
Tanya, would leave Monica and Joy’s house later that morning.
It had been
quite a fun vacation, Hilary thought. The things she had done on her night out
with her friend Monica… she didn’t think she still had it in her.
Well, maybe she
hadn’t, she thought sadly, looking at her aging reflection. Maybe she had just
done it all because luck had intervened.
“Still missing
it?” said Monica, entering the room and closing the door behind her.
Hilary blushed
and parted her eyes from the mirror.
“I was just…”
“No need to be
shy about it,” said Monica. “I miss it too. I mean, who wouldn’t? We got to be
18 again for a day!”
Hilary nodded
and looked at her reflection again, imagining she wasn’t seeing a middle-aged
woman, but the vibrant and attractive young girl she had become during that incredible
weekend.
“I had forgotten
how great it felt. I almost didn’t remember what a looker I used to be,” muttered
Hilary, still feigning she was glancing at her youthful face.
“Ha! I remember
it all too well, sadly,” said Monica, taking Hilary out of her daydreams. “We
all under in your shadow back in college; it was just that you were a prude
back then. But yesterday? All the guys were over you again. And you went crazy
this time!”
Hilary blushed.
It had been too mortifying doing things like stripping down to her underwear in
public when she had been a fit young woman, but now the memory of her escapade
was a bit embarrassing.
“I don’t
understand what happened to us. Usually alcohol doesn’t affect us that much”
“Excuses,
excuses!” said Monica laughing.
“Well, what
about you?” she countered, and Monica feigned indignation. “You went as crazy as you were back in the day.
You did stretch out over the bar at that club, remember?”
“Yeah, that I
did,” said Monica, picturing her young self barefoot and splayed across the
table.
“And as for guys
going crazy for you, it’s not like you didn’t see any action,” proceeded Hilary.
“Didn’t you dance and kiss that big hunk at the same club?”
“Oh, yeah. But
then he left me and went after his crying girlfriend!”
“Yeah, I saw
it,” laughed Hilary. “But believe me, he was into you anyway. And he was a
stud. Did you see the body he had?”
“Of course I
did, why do you think I kissed him?”
They laughed.
Then Hilary stopped.
“What happened?
I see you're very worried.”
The woman looked
at her lifelong friend.
“It’s just I
don’t think I should have left that paper with the spell lying around. I just
took a picture and then tried it out with you. But I left the original in here
and what if the kids…?”
“You didn’t know
it would work. We both thought it was a very silly phony. And I don’t think the
kids wouldn’t have been interested on it. At their age… they would probably
think it even sillier than we did. Children don’t believe in magic anymore.
And neither did we, but we were two desperate middle-aged ladies and we were
willing to try it.”
Monica laughed
again, but Hilary was still quite serious.
“I don’t know.
After all, I found that paper inside the book Felicia was reading. She found it
at her Grandma’s. And… you’ve seen how big she got over that weekend.”
Monica nodded.
“Kids grow
naturally all the time. Sometimes in spurts like that. You did the same around
her age, if you remember. It doesn’t have to be the spell.”
Hilary wanted to
be persuaded.
“Joy would tell
you if anything had happened, wouldn’t she?”
“My daughter is
very responsible, nothing like I was,” smiled Monica. “I trust her. Even if she
doesn’t tell me something, I have to trust it’s for the right reasons.”
“Why? Have you
found anything suspicious?”
Monica pondered
the question.
“Nothing. Just…
It’s stupid. I have some emergency money hidden in the house. Only Joy knows
where it is. And I checked on it yesterday… and it looks like I have about
thrice the amount I had!”
“Okay, so Joy
definitely isn’t stealing. And I doubt she’s making that kind money without you
knowing and then giving it to you.”
“Yeah, I told
you it was nothing. I must have miscounted.”
“Yes.”
“We have great
kids, you and I.”
Monica left the
room with a reassuring smile and Hilary felt much better.
Well, still not
much better about her older body. She touched her slightly bloated midsection,
not at all like the toned waist she had just a few days earlier.
And she wondered
if she could use the spell again, maybe permanently this time. Even if she
couldn’t find the paper with the spell any more (when she had asked, Joy had
said casually that they had thrown it away), Hilary still had the photo she had
taken o in her phone, along with a few pictures of her young self she would
always treasure.
But no, she had
two kids, how could she just regress into a young woman while they needed a
mother? Maybe later, when they were older, and she could explain, she would do
it.
Tuesday
– 10:13 am.
Ex-Officer
Jenkins sighed as she looked around the shabby little apartment she now
inhabited.
Her eyes fell
over the dusty mirror in the wall and she examined her alien reflection once
again. It was that of a stranger and yet not a fully unfamiliar one. She looked
like she could be her own sister. In fact, she looked a lot like the two actual
sisters Jenkins had. They were both very pretty, but Jenkins had to admit she
now probably ranked a bit over them. She had become a looker.
She was used to
being attractive. It just turned out that being a hot woman wasn’t much like
being a hot man.
Jenkins wondered
for the hundredth time if this had been a benevolent curse or rather a blessing
in disguise.
On one hand,
yes, she had escaped prison. Bosanno’s collaborators were falling one by one,
and when Jenkins' turn came, it had been indeed assumed the dirty cop had
escaped. And as long as she was her female self, the law couldn’t reach her.
On the other
hand, though, her life had turned into an undignified hell. One of her old contacts
was working to get her a new identity, and she had been able to save the money
from one of his accounts before the others were frozen. So, she could survive
for a while, but she hadn’t enough dough to go by for long.
Thus, she had to
swallow her pride and actually get a job at the strip club. She had only worked
there for one night thus far, but it had been downright humiliating. He
wondered how a normal female could endure it, not to mention one who had just
been a man. A man who had regularly demeaned many a woman in his life.
Maybe it was
poetic justice, like the fact that she had been made to wear a policewoman
costume by her very first client.
She had wanted
to claw the eyes out of the disgusting man’s face, and yet she couldn’t fully
blame him for the way he had looked at her. She would have acted exactly the
same in her male days.
“I deserve
this,” said an inner voice she had discovered just after her transformation,
and which she hadn’t been able to silence. “No, I deserve worse than this.”
Maybe it took a
bit of suffering for a scumbag to finally develop a conscience.
Tuesday
– 12:21 am.
Felicia was just
out of the bathroom and had dried her hair, and she was currently invested in
the now daily process of dressing in a way that would downplay her growth. She
knew her Mom had already noticed something different (what mother wouldn’t?),
but Felicia thought it wiser to reveal the full extent of her changes gradually
rather than forcefully, so that she could accept them as natural.
Tanya stuck her
head into the room they shared.
“They’re almost
ready,” she announced. “Monica insisted we should eat here before we leave, so
your Mom is helping her in the kitchen. We’re waiting for you at the backyard.
Joy wants to say goodbye.”
So Felicia
finished dressing up in haste and ran downstairs along with her friend. Joy and
David were indeed sitting at the garden.
Her brother
smiled at Tanya, and she responded and sat next to him. Felicia rolled her
eyes.
“I’ve allowed
you to date each other,” she said. “But please keep the sugary stuff to
minimum. You don’t have to melt each time the other enters the room.”
Joy giggled, but
David crossed his arms.
“You “allowed”
us? Since when do I need your permission?”
“Since I am your
older sister now,” she said. “Feels good now that the tables have turned,
doesn’t it, bro?”
David looked at
her from head to toe and shook his head.
“I’m still not
used to the new you, sis. You look so big.”
Felicia wasn’t
still adapted to it either, but she just shrugged.
“I guess I’m
tall for a 13-years-old, let alone an 11-years-old. I’m dressing like a kid,
thoughm to ease the transition for you.”
Felicia had
chosen a cute outfit that made her look more childish, but which was too small
for her, so it also looked tight on her at the same time, highlighting her
growing body. But she thought she had done a good work with her face. She
looked very different from her usual self, but she thought she could still pass
for 11. She had also hidden her hair, which had grown much longer, within a
hairdo that looked shorter.
“To ease the
transition for your mom, you mean,” said Tanya. “She suspects something is up.”
“And… she’s been
making questions about the book,” revealed Joy. “I told her you had said you
couldn’t make any sense out of it, but that you thought it was a great prop. I
believe she wants to ask you to give it to her but is afraid to. Do you think
she knows? About the spells?”
“My Mom?”
Felicia considered it. “No way! She has no clue.”
“Felicia and I
have hidden it quite well anyway, just in case,” commented Tanya. “And we only
take it out when we’re alone in our room.”
“Anything new
with it?” asked David curiously.
“Tanya has been
translating it,” explained Felicia. “It’s a slow process. You have to do it
letter by letter. And it’s even trickier because we don’t want Monica or Mom to
see what we’re doing.”
“We’ve only
translated the first few pages,” sighed Tanya with a tired voice. “They don’t
even contain any spells. It’s sort of a… foreword”
“Any luck
figuring out what happened at the strip club?” asked Joy. “You know, with the…
with that cop, and everything.”
Felicia and
Tanya looked at each other peculiarly.
“It seems that
we did cast a real spell after all. Advanced magic too,” said Tanya.
“But how?” David
was at lost. “You didn’t have the book, how could you know that spell?”
Tanya bit her
lower lip, but Felicia lowered her voice and said:
“It seems the
book had turned us both into witches earlier.”
“WHAT?” David
and Joy yelled together.
“Please, don’t
scream!” implored Tanya. “Well, you see, it’s all on the foreword. Magic is
very ancient and very complicated. And that book is one of its oldest pillars. Anyone can cast a spell by reading it.
On the other hand, real witches can perform magic on their own.”
“And you two are
witches?” Joy was impressed. “Since when?”
“Since the book
deemed us worthy of magic. I guess it hadn’t been used for ages, and I was the
first one to give it a try, so it bestowed me with its powers,” said Felicia
leaning on the wire fence.
“But it didn’t
affect us? Joy and I?” wondered David, obviously intimidated. He wasn’t sure
what impressed him the most, being a witch’s brother or being a witch’s
boyfriend.
“No, it was just
me and Tanya. I think she proved her worth further than I did, when she figured
that the book was in English and that she could translate it. I believe that’s
when she was turned.”
“So… do you
actually have magic powers now? You can do anything!” Joy looked quite excited.
“No we can’t,”
said Tanya, even though she smiled too. “We’re very inexperienced yet, and
we’ll have much to learn. That’s why we need to study the book. It’ll help us
progress and make us able to use our magic on our own eventually.”
“But you said
you did advanced magic. That gender-swap spell!”
“That was
different. We were in jeopardy, and our magic kicked instinctively. The book
says it sometimes happens to rookie witches,” remarked Tanya “That’s why it’s
so important we learn to control it.”
Joy still seemed
pensive.
“One can’t learn
to be a witch from scratch, then?”
“We could teach
you once we’re more advanced ourselves,” promised Felicia, and Joy beamed. “But
your powers won’t be as developed as those of the ones chosen by the book.”
“Can boys learn
it too?”
Tanya looked at
David with some pity.
“I’m afraid the
book is quite clear about that on its introduction to magic. Only females have
the potential to harness the higher powers.”
“But we know a
spell that can help you with that, bro. Remember?” joked Felicia. “I’ve always
wanted to have a sister, if you’re interested…”
“Hell no!”
Everyone
laughed, even David himself, though he secretly feared Felicia would try it on
him as one of her pranks. He would make sure that Tanya would protect him from
that.
“Kids! Dinner is
ready!” Hilary’s voice came from inside.
“We’re going!” yelled
David as he got up.
“I’m sad to see
you leave,” said Joy doing the same but turning around to look at her new
friends. “I hope we can visit each other frequently now.”
“I heard your
mothers talking about it,” revealed Tanya. “It seems their friendship has
rekindled and they want to see each other more often too. And I’m making sure
my parents let me come with you.”
Felicia grinned
with the others, but then her smile expanded mischievously.
“We could do it
again sometime, you know,” she said. “It was
an exciting spell.”
And despite
everything that had gone wrong the first time, they all agreed with Felicia,
though they decided that in this instance they would make sure not to ingest a
single drop of alcohol.
THE END
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