Wednesday, April 15, 2015

READER'S ENTRY: Rule the School (Part 4)

Rule the School (Part 4)
by BLZBub

Previous story: Part 1Part 2, Part 3

Follow ups: Part 5Epilogue


  1. So glad you're finally attempting to explain why the girls look different from one picture to another, as there's always a second transformation.
    As great as your stories are, I find it very distracting when people keep randomly changing from one picture to another, some times within the same part!
    Do you know how many different people you used for the Asian character last month?
    SIXTEEN (I just counted) Not even were they not alike at all, but sometimes they were young and sometimes they were VERY old, though the character was supposed to be in her early twenties.
    Not criticism, just begging you to make your pretty good entries into GREAT ones!

  2. Very nice plot!! Hope to see more... ;)