Sunday, February 1, 2015

READER ENTRY: Halloween Party (Part 14)

Officially closing the January submissions now!

Halloween Party (Part 14)
by Archibald_Heatherington_Nastyface



Previous stories: Part 1Part 2Part 3Part 4Part 5Part 6Part 7Part 8Part 9Part 10Part 11, Part 12, Part 13

Follow ups: Part 15


  1. Last-minute submission for the win! :D

    You probably changed it on purpose, but the "close up" was meant to go on top of the "back view" on the right in part 6; I was trying to visualize them looking at eachother. Looking at it now though I think you were probably right not to do that as it probably would have looked messy.

    A suggestion for the future, in cases where there's a lot of text and it ends up being rather small like in part 6 (I was afraid that would happen), you can make the image as wide as it'll fit on the screen to allow more room. If you tell me what the font is, I'll change it myself and send it to you.

    Also, did a couple of your posts get removed or something? I briefly say a post about February's submissions and listing all of the Reader Submissions for January, and a poll at the top of the screen voting for a favorite January Reader Submission; but when I refreshed the page both those things were gone.

    Thanks again for all your great work and for posting these submissions. I got a blast out of writing these especially this one, and it's great to see them up there. Hopefully more people will be inspired to take a crack at writing submissions in the coming months! :)

    1. Sorry, I didn't understand how to place the images. The name of the font is Pristina.

      Yes, I deleted the poll to allow for your new post to enter. I'm placing it again.

    2. Yeah, sorry for leaving that for you to figure out. I would have edited them together myself if it hadn't already been so close to the deadline.

      In future, I'll try to make the images myself if I have time. After redoing the last two here (also added to the last part of the story, for anyone who read it already and didn't notice the change), I think I've got the basic hang of it. :)

  2. I can see where our lines of thinking have crossed again. We both thought up the queen costume idea, just that I went with cards while you went with real royalty. Isn't that weird?

    1. That, and we both went for the older, plus-size model. I originally wasn't even going to use the non-plus-size image; the last four segments of the story were originally going to be ONE image, and I only split it up as I added more and more to it. The basic beats stayed the same, but I wound up writing way more than I initially intended.

      Anyway, like I said, once I read your entry I realized that the executions were very different even though they used similar costumes. Still quite a weird coincidence.

      Hoping to see more from you in the future as we seem to have similar tastes. :)

  3. May you do a tg one from female to male?