I want to thank everyone who read the first part, and especially those who commented on it.
There's one other issue I forgot to clarify in the foreword to Part I. While this story takes place in a real city, take in consideration I don't pretend this to be the real city of Las Vegas. I made it up from my narrative needs, and I'm well aware that it most likely isn't at all like the real-world place. If you read it with that in mind, you'll enjoy it better, especially if you're acquainted with the real Vegas.
Important questions are about to be answered by Part III, so share your thoughts now in the comments section. What do you think happened to these kids?
There's one other issue I forgot to clarify in the foreword to Part I. While this story takes place in a real city, take in consideration I don't pretend this to be the real city of Las Vegas. I made it up from my narrative needs, and I'm well aware that it most likely isn't at all like the real-world place. If you read it with that in mind, you'll enjoy it better, especially if you're acquainted with the real Vegas.
Important questions are about to be answered by Part III, so share your thoughts now in the comments section. What do you think happened to these kids?
Part 1
Saturday – 10:32 am.
All of them were very
self-conscious as they waited for the elevator, feeling as if everyone would
see through their facades and recognize who they really were. But of course,
nobody thought they were anything but a trio of young adults waking up after a
wild night at Vegas, and getting ready for another round. And in a sense, they
were.
“Do you think maybe we could ask
the hotel people if they know something about our arrival yesterday?” proposed
David indicating the front desk.
“I thought about it, but I don’t
think we should do it,” declared his sister. “We don’t know how the fuck we
managed to get that suite yesterday, because we obviously don’t have proper
identification. So we obviously lied. We ought to stay away from them.”
“Uhm… you are swearing again,”
noticed Tanya.
“Oh, fuck off. I don’t know why,
but I can’t help it. They just come to me. And we’ve got more important things
to do than cleaning my language.”
The walk to the store took them
about fifteen minutes, which was a good thing, because they were arriving at
the same time a young man with blonde dreadlocks was opening the shop.
“Uhm… hey!” said David, wondering
exactly what he should ask.
“Dude!,” answered back the clerk
with a glimpse of recognition. “Y’all back so soon?”
“Uhm… yeah? I take it we were
here last night?” he asked trying to put on a complicit smile.
“Dude, y’all were wasted, ya
know? No wonder you don’t remember a thing.”
He laughed out loud and David
joined him with his coarse cackle. They had lucked out. Here was someone who
had some kind of information.
“You were here a bit after 9 or
so. I was about to close. And you bought a lot of stuff!”
He seemed quite pleased at that.
David kept questioning him.
“Yeah, that’s weird. Did you see
anything else? Anything unusual?”
“Other than you were drunker
than… Well, not that it’s something unusual on this city, ya know?”
“I guess not. So?”
“No, nothing else.”
“And were we with someone else? A
16-years-old girl, maybe?”
“Dude, don’t tell me y’all were
drinking with a minor!”
“No, of course not.”
“No, I’ve seen no teenager with
you. But you were with a third babe, right?” added the clerk lowly. “Golden
brown, wavy hair. Really hot too. Quite stacked, like those two,” he pointed at
Tanya and particularly Felicia, who had remained near the door while David
talked. “What do you feed them with?”
David joined him in another fake
laugh.
“We don’t remember how she
looked,” admitted David, then he invented a quick lie. “She… she stole from us,
but we were so drunk we can’t place her face anymore.”
“Maybe I could help with that,”
said the clerk.
“Security cameras?” asked David,
remembering a common movie plot device.
“Nah, that shit don’t work no
more,” he said. “But your babes were in a festive mood and all. They took like
a dozen selfies with my phone. And I was like… I’m totally cool with that. And
you didn’t mind either. I mean… I respect you, my man…”
“Yeah, I’m cool with it,” said
David quickly. “So?”
The clerk looked through his
phone and, sure enough, he quickly found a picture of a very cheerful Felicia
in the store’s changing rooms.
“And here’s the blonde.”
David looked longingly at a
selfie of Tanya in a similar jogging suit, followed by another one in a dress
with a plunging neckline.
“But I can’t find the other one.
Damn, I was sure I had one, but no, that girl didn’t take my phone, now that I
come to think about it. I guess it makes sense if she was a lady thief and all,
ya know? No evidence left nowhere.”
David groaned in disappointment.
He kept trying to get more information from the clerk, but he couldn’t tell him
anything useful.
“Well, so we’re back to square
one,” said Tanya with some disappointment after they got away from the store.
“Not entirely. We know we were
here until about 10 pm, and that Joy was with us. And by the looks of it, she’s
been transformed into an adult too. We lost her at some point after that. But I
agree, we don’t have much to keep going. In fact, things have turned more
difficult, since we have no idea how she looks now.”
They didn’t know what to do now.
“I’m hungry as shit,” let out
Felicia. “I wonder if we’ve eaten anything but booze.”
David had also noticed that his -presumably
bigger- stomach had been rumbling.
“You brought that money you found
at the suite, didn’t you? I saw a place over there. We should take a bite.”
It looked like a cheap, slightly
greasy place with a horrible flowery wallpaper, but it would suffice to settle
their appetites.
David ordered the largest steak
he could. Though hungry, Tanya had the sudden urge to watch her waistline, and
so she asked for a salad. She also knew she needed a strong black coffee,
despite never having drunk one before. Felicia settled for a big hamburger and
a beer.
“I don’t think you should drink
that,” Tanya scolded her. “We don’t know what alcohol did to us.”
“You’re right, I don’t know what
came over me! I just felt like drinking that. I really wanted it.” She changed
her order to a Pepsi.
“How could you want something you don’t really know?”
asked Tanya dumbfounded, and then she realized she had been sipping her coffee
like the most normal thing in the world without even noticing. “Yuck, I
actually enjoy this thing now.”
Meanwhile, David gulped down his
meat like it was nothing and ordered a second serving. He was finishing that
one when a ringing sound startled all of them, and it was coming from Felicia’s
purse.
“That’s not my ringtone,” she
said.
“You probably changed it last
night. It seems like we did a lot of things.”
“Uhm… this isn’t my phone
either,” noticed Felicia when she produced it.
“No, that’s Joy’s phone! I saw
her using it yesterday!” remembered Tanya.
“Crap! That’s my mother’s number.
She wants to check on us!”
“If we don’t answer, they’ll know
something is wrong.”
Felicia put the mobile phone in
Tanya’s hands.
“Why me?”
“My voice is too deep. She’ll
know. Yours is a bit softer. You can manage to sound like a kid.”
Shaking, Tanya knew she couldn’t
delay, so she answered.
“Hello, Mrs. Robbie!” she said
maybe too eagerly, trying to pitch her voice higher, closer to Joy’s teenage
one. She still sounded like an adult, but it was a passable imitation over the
phone.
“Joy! Is everything all right?”
“Peachy, uhm… Quite right.”
“Nice of you to watch the kids.
Sorry I called so late, we… well, we overslept.”
“Don’t worry, so did we. Are you
having fun?”
“Oh, yes. Well, you know, as much
as a couple old ladies can have.” She giggled gingerly. “Sorry your mother
couldn’t speak with you. She’s still kind of sleepy.”
“No problem, Mrs. Robbie.”
“So everything is okay? You don’t
need us earlier, or anything?”
“NO! I mean… Everything is under
control. Please don’t cut short Mom’s holiday. She’s been looking forward to
this.”
“As have I. See you then, girly,”
and she hung.
“Girly?” asked David with a
frown, as he stirred his own coffee.
“I hate it when Mom thinks she
can talk like a teenager,” shrugged Felicia. “Anyway, you saved us there,
Tanya.”
Now that it was over, the blonde
was quivering more than ever, but she nodded.
“We can’t give up, not now,” said
David. “There’s still time.”
The call had shaken them, but had
given them a push to continue their search.
“Ok, I say the next logical step
is Joy’s house. I mean, that’s where the actual transformation probably took
place. Maybe we can find another clue there,” submitted Felicia. “Or else, if
Joy is also looking for us, which is
quite possible, she might also head there. There’s even an off-chance that she
has been there all along, and is still sleeping. We should keep trying to call
there every fifteen minutes or so, in any case.”
“Leave that to me,” volunteered
Tanya.
“Okay, so to Monica’s it is!”
said an enthusiastic David, but then his expression darkened. “Except… we’re in
the heart of Vegas now, and the house isn’t exactly around the corner. I guess
we used a taxi last night to get here.”
“We should take another one now.
Or…” Felicia counted the money she still had and considered what she was about
to say. “Or, we could rent a car. I have a feeling we’re going to have to move around
quite a lot today. Having our own transportation could be useful.”
Tanya choked on her coffee.
“Excuse me, has any of you
learned to drive yet?”
“Uhm, no, but really, how
different could it be from a video game? David is quite good at those,” said
Felicia looking at her brother. “And this is Vegas. I doubt we shall require
that much documentation if we go to one of those shady places…”
Against his better judgment,
David agreed. He was wanting to prove himself behind a real car.
“Okay, so that’s settled,” said
Felicia brightly, gulping down her last big piece of hamburger.
“How can you eat that?” asked
Tanya with certain disgust. “I mean, we’re older now, we can’t eat just anything. And what if we stay like this?
You’re going to ruin your figure.”
Even Tanya was surprised by her
sudden burst of vanity, but Felicia laughed it away.
“I don’t know why, but I’m sure my
metabolism is quite good. It’s like everything I eat just goes to my tits. Look
at this, it doesn’t seems like I’m getting fat anytime soon.”
Felicia raised her blouse to
reveal her fit abdomen, attracting the gazes of many a customer on the place.
“Hey, there’s a car rental just
down here!” said Tanya, who had been looking for one on her phone. “Honest Frank. Right… Seems just like the
kind of place we need.”
She was interrupted by a
slick-looking man who had approached their table. He bowed towards David.
“My respects, good sir, but I
couldn’t help but admire your lovely companions.”
Tanya looked a bit scared, while
Felicia smirked at the attention. The man produced a small purple card and handed
it to her.
“I represent a very respectable
establishment where a woman of your… attributes would feel quite at home.”
“Loaded Ladies Strip Club,” read Felicia from the card. “Sounds very respectable.”
The man smiled politely as she
looked up at him from her seat.
“Just a colorful name to attract
our distinguished clientele… Anyway, if you’re looking for a job, either steady
or temporary, come see me later,” he turned towards Tanya. “You would be quite
welcome too.”
The blonde was of course loaded enough too, and only in company
of Felicia’s melon-sized ones, would her breasts fall second. Nevertheless, she
also received a card.
“I’m telling you, the faster we
get out of this town, the better,” said David as soon as the man was gone.
“Oh, that was just harmless fun,”
said Felicia and while Tanya shredded her card and threw it into her empty cup,
she placed hers into her cleavage. “Always wanted to do that.”
Saturday – 11:26 am.
The car rental was
shabby-looking. Despite its Honest Frank
moniker, they were sure all kinds of business went there, mostly on the
illegitimate side. Which at the moment was what they needed.
“Wait outside. I’ll handle this,”
said David, trusting his muscled physique would protect him.
There were four cars inside the
garage, one of them crashed. There was a counter, where yet another disreputable-looking
man, probably Honest Frank himself, was counting money.
“Good morning. I wonder if…”
started David.
But as soon as Frank saw him, he
yelled at the overgrown boy.
“YOU! Got a lot of nerve, do you?
Unless you’re coming to pay?”
“Uh… Do we know each other?”
“Do we… Do we…? Are you fucking
kidding me?”
“Hey, sir, I just wanted to rent
a car, but if…”
“RENT A CAR! You already
destroyed one,” said Honest Frank pointing at the crashed vehicle. “And you
didn’t even report it. We just found it this morning, abandoned in Mason Avenue!”
“Okay, uhm… Maybe we could…”
“Stay there! I’m calling the cops
and then we’ll settle this!”
But as soon as Frank turned
around to pick a phone, David ran away from the garage.
He didn’t escape by the front
door. Because Frank probably knew them too, David didn’t want to risk him
seeing Felicia and Tanya, who were waiting for him there, so he took a mighty
jump and crossed over the back fence.
He ran and ran for countless ugly
alleys, and then he finally stopped, sure he had lost him. He was thankful
about not having his short, weak legs any more, when he saw Frank coming to him
on the other end of the alley, armed with a baseball bat. David looked around.
There was no escape. He had to face the man.
Physically, he was more than a
match for Frank, but inside he was just a scared 13-years-old against a
street-smart man… armed with a wooden club.
But when he took a swing at him,
David just stopped his arm with his big left hand, and taking a powerful right
hook, he knocked him cold.
He was quite pleased about what
he had accomplished, when he saw an old lady in the other end of the alley, who
ran away from sight as she screamed “Attack! Police!”
And sure enough, because that was
just his luck, he heard a patrol’s siren. He got away from the alley, but he
knew it wouldn’t be long before they would catch him.
Saturday – 11:44 am.
“Isn’t he taking a bit too long?”
asked a worried Tanya.
“Yeah, I think so. Let’s wait a
bit longer.”
Felicia looked extensively at her
friend.
“So… have you
been feeling any different?”
“What do you
mean?”
“Well, I think
this did something to us. Beyond just our bodies, I mean,” clarified Felicia.
“Something inside. It’s as if our minds have been tampered too. Like we’ve got new… instincts.”
Tanya considered
it.
“Yes… I think
you’re right. I’ve noticed something. I’m just not sure what is it yet.”
Their
conversation was cut short by the police car passing in front of them.
“Isn’t that…
Isn’t that David?” asked Tanya looking at the man who was being taken away in
the backseat.
“Damn, that’s
him! We’re really fucked up this
time.”
Saturday – 12:35 m.
After taking his
pictures and a short statement from the officers who had caught him, David was
pushed into the police station’s cell.
He sat on a
corner and tried to put on a mean face, despite feeling scared beyond his wits.
He had done it. His first day as an adult, and he was already in jail.
There were about
fifteen more guys inside, most of whom looked very dangerous. David’s size
allowed him to be left alone for a while, but this time, he wasn’t the only
large man around.
Indeed, just a
few minutes later, a guy who was both taller and beefier than him, had already
started to taunt him.
“What’s a pretty
boy like you doing in here?” He laughed out loud along with a group of friends.
David ignored
him. He doubted he could win this fight, and even if he did, he didn’t want any
more trouble with the authorities.
Meanwhile,
Felicia and Tanya had finally arrived to the station.
“Come, Tanya,”
said the brunette, pushing her friend into the bathroom.
“Are you sure
this is going to work?”
“I hope so. It
does in the movies,” said Felicia, taking off her blouse and swapping it with a
white one she extracted from her large bag.
“I feel too
exposed with this,” commented Tanya after changing her own outfit with a black
dress that showed her bare legs and her cleavage. She had also painted her lips
deep red. She twisted her hands timidly looking at her reflection. “I don’t
know how you’ve been walking around like this all morning. Our boobs… uhm… our
breasts are all exposed.”
“Yeah, that’s
the idea. Don’t worry, we’re women now. And you’ve seen how people dresses in
this city. Didn’t you look at those three here at the station?”
“I think those
are… prostitutes,” said Tanya, blushing intensely.
“Don’t worry.
You look very sexy, but you’re decent. You can’t be possibly mistaken by a
hooker. Maybe I can, though,” she added with a shrug.
Felicia led the
way out and after a bit of asking, they were directed to Officer Jenkins, a
young, upright-looking cop. Felicia hoped he wasn’t as honest as he looked.
“I’m here about
my brother. He was detained just a while ago…” she started, once they stepped
into his office.
“What’s his
name?” he asked, reviewing a list.
“Uhm…” Felicia
knew David couldn’t have used his real name when he was detained, but she had no
idea what he had told them.
“Oh, it’s Chris Larson,
isn’t he?” said Officer Jenkins glancing at the names. “Just brought in. Got
into a fight, apparently.”
“Yeah, that’s
him,” said Felicia, hoping she wasn’t about to appeal for the wrong guy. She
believed Chris Larson was a boy from David’s class, so that sounded like a name
he could have made up. “You see, he wasn’t doing anything wrong, really. That
guy just was… He was trying to assault me and my friend here! He just defended
us.”
“Right,” said
the officer, who was looking at the women’s busts with great interest, and
suddenly didn’t seem like such a clean cop. “Well, it says here they never
found the alleged victim, so there’s no real charges. The witness, an older
woman, also bailed while our men took your brother away. Nevertheless, he
failed to produce identification when he was asked for it, and that’s why they
brought him here.”
“Well, it just
happened that he lost his wallet yesterday. He was a bit drunk and he misplaced
them. You know, it’s Vegas. I’m ready to pay for his bail.”
She laughed in
an unmistakably flirty way and the officer seemed more eager than before.
“I understand
lady, but you see, I can’t do a thing…”
“Oh, come on,
surely you’re very important here. Otherwise they wouldn’t have directed us to
you.”
She touched his
hands with her nails in such a subtle way he didn’t realize it at first.
“Well, er… Yes,
I’m important enough,“ he said swelling a bit. “Nevertheless, your brother
should be correctly processed before… After all, he was caught and…”
“He was caught
defending the honor of two young ladies,” whispered Tanya, joining in, and
surprising even herself with her seductive tones. “Any real man would do that.
I’m sure you’d do the same for us, right?”
“Ob-Obviously, but…”
“So, will you
help us now?” pleaded Felicia. “We’d be really grateful. We could even give you
a special invitation.”
She produced the
Loaded Ladies Strip Club card from
her chest and handed it to him.
“That’s where my
friend and I work,” she lied very convincingly. “If you come later tonight,
we’ll both give you a private show in appreciation.”
Officer Jenkins stood up very quickly and
pocketed the card.
“I’ll see what I
can do,” he said and went away.
“That was
amazing,” said Tanya.
“Thanks. I feel
absolutely disgusted at myself, though.”
“Yeah, me too.”
David, in the
meantime, didn’t know how much longer he would be able to withstand it in there
before fists were involved. He was sure the others were about to jump him when
a guard approached and everyone stepped back.
“Chris Larson!
You’re in luck,” he said opening the door.
It took a moment
for David to remember that this was supposed to be his name. He got up slowly.
“Someone paid
for your bail,” announced the guard and he escorted him to the front desk of
the station, where Officer Jenkins made him sign a release. Then he brought him
before Felicia and Tanya.
“I’ll be there,”
muttered the policeman before leaving, winking at the girls.
“What does he
mean?” asked David as his sister hugged him.
“Nothing. Are
you all right?”
David suddenly
went pale and turned around. He had just seen Honest Frank strolling into the
station, a great bloody bump on his head.
“What…?”
David took Felicia
by her shoulders and turned her around too.
“Come on, we
have to get out of here.”
He walked them
in the opposite direction.
“It’s that guy
from the car rental. Apparently we also rented one last night.”
“We rented a car
at that very place?”
"Makes sense, doesn't it? Last night, we were at the clothing store, then we decided to get us a vehicle. And the closest place was that one. Just like today. Anyway, we kind of destroyed it. He's pissed."
"On, no!" said Tanya putting her hands over her mouth.
"He's likely here to report me. If he does, they're not going to let me leave. Or you, if he also saw you last night."
But they were able to escape from the station in time. They got into the first taxi they found and gave the driver the address to Monica's house.
great addition to the story. Good to see them adjusting to their new roles
ReplyDeleteThis might be the best story yet!
ReplyDeleteThank you! I did try to make it into my definitive story, since it's my final one.
DeleteWell, I've never been to Las Vegas, but it seems like a somewhat accurate description of Sin City. This might not be the best place for kids-turned-adults to be, but the story is definitely turning interesting. Can't wait to get some answers in the next part.
ReplyDeleteNext part is my favorite, and the characters will discover a lot of things.
DeleteI enjoyed the second part, as it took the story in some interesting directions that I wasn't expecting, but that make a lot of sense. If I had to guess at the cause of the transformation, my only guess at the moment is that Joy had some role in it, although I am not entirely confident in this suspicion.
ReplyDeleteJoy is involved, true, but probably in a different way than you think. There are a few clues to the cause in the story so far :P
DeleteWho are the girls
ReplyDeleteThe blonde is Tanya and the brunette is Felicia.
DeleteThanks but i mean in real life like are they models and ehats their real. Names haha
DeleteEnjoying this so far. I especially like Felicia and how she's adapted to her new status and takes joy in it. She even plays quite the convincing little minx with that cop!
ReplyDeleteIf and when she goes back to being a little girl she's going to give her parents fits as a teenager.
Yes, I'd imagine Felicia would be a difficult teenager.
DeleteNot necessarily for the "minx" aspect of it, because that's just a role she was playing, but she would be a handful nevertheless.