Thanks! I'm keeping it quite faithful plotwise, but I'm almost compeltely rewritting the text. Not only because its English has even more problems than mine, but also because thereare a lot of logic issues, like the characters seem a bit crazy at times, and the 7-year-olds act more like three (not to mention they're so small they can't reach a doorknob)
Just wondering, are you, by any chance, able to translate the Chinese dialog? I can use Google Translate on the Spanish, but not the Chinese because it's written phonetically. :P
Because I have some knowledge of Spanish, I know those parts are very badly written, so I suppose thee same happens with Chinese, which I unfortunaly don't know.
I'm still not sure what I'm going to do about that, but I'm sure I'll figure something out.
I was always under the impression that Ethnic Candies was still a work in progress. At the very least the last chapter seemed to end at an awkward place.
Also what's up with the Reversion? Its been nearly a month since you posted the first chapter of Part 2. Have you decided to put it on hold or something?
Yes, I also thought it was a work in progress, and you can see I told so to the person who asked me about this in the Request page. But then said requester told me the story hadn't been updated in a long time, and it's most likely abandoned. I'm beginning to think that's true.
Anyway, I read it again and I think the important things already happened, and that more than a half of the story were repetitions on senseless dialog. So I'm doing what's been posted and trying to give it a better closure. And, if for some reason the original is updated, I can do the same here.
About the Reversion, the simple answer is that every time I try to work on it, I end up doing other stories. Don't know why, I guess one has different inspirations at different times. There was another times when every time I tried to do something different, I ended up writing about The Reversion.
So, as much as I want to update that one, it'll come out when it wants. But at least I've been publishing other stuff! These last months were among my bussiest ever, specially with the amount of pictures, per post, because I usually only poster one.
By the way, this December 1th, I'm doing one with 20 pictures in the same post!
great start. I enjoy the story from LJM. Can't wait to see your additions
ReplyDeleteThanks! I'm keeping it quite faithful plotwise, but I'm almost compeltely rewritting the text. Not only because its English has even more problems than mine, but also because thereare a lot of logic issues, like the characters seem a bit crazy at times, and the 7-year-olds act more like three (not to mention they're so small they can't reach a doorknob)
DeleteJust wondering, are you, by any chance, able to translate the Chinese dialog? I can use Google Translate on the Spanish, but not the Chinese because it's written phonetically. :P
DeleteBecause I have some knowledge of Spanish, I know those parts are very badly written, so I suppose thee same happens with Chinese, which I unfortunaly don't know.
DeleteI'm still not sure what I'm going to do about that, but I'm sure I'll figure something out.
Looking forward to this one! :D
ReplyDeleteI was always under the impression that Ethnic Candies was still a work in progress. At the very least the last chapter seemed to end at an awkward place.
ReplyDeleteAlso what's up with the Reversion? Its been nearly a month since you posted the first chapter of Part 2. Have you decided to put it on hold or something?
Yes, I also thought it was a work in progress, and you can see I told so to the person who asked me about this in the Request page. But then said requester told me the story hadn't been updated in a long time, and it's most likely abandoned. I'm beginning to think that's true.
DeleteAnyway, I read it again and I think the important things already happened, and that more than a half of the story were repetitions on senseless dialog. So I'm doing what's been posted and trying to give it a better closure. And, if for some reason the original is updated, I can do the same here.
About the Reversion, the simple answer is that every time I try to work on it, I end up doing other stories. Don't know why, I guess one has different inspirations at different times. There was another times when every time I tried to do something different, I ended up writing about The Reversion.
So, as much as I want to update that one, it'll come out when it wants. But at least I've been publishing other stuff! These last months were among my bussiest ever, specially with the amount of pictures, per post, because I usually only poster one.
By the way, this December 1th, I'm doing one with 20 pictures in the same post!
The hype train is on!
ReplyDeleteCant wait to see the process