Friday, January 23, 2015

Ethnic Candies (Part 12)

I've been messing-up the text a lot lately. Don't know what's happening. Fixed it again.

Spanish translation:

“Oh, no… This is bad, very bad… I can’t go out looking like this. My family would lose it! How am I going to explain to my family about what happened to me? I don’t even know where to start.”

“What? Am I talking Spanish? I can’t speak English? I don’t speak Spanish! What’s happening to me? I don’t want to be like this! I don’t want to become a Latin woman!”

“I can’t go home with this appearance.”

Previous stories: Part 1Part 2Part 3Part 4Part 5Part 6Part 7Part 8Part 9Part 10, Part 11

Follow ups: Part 13Part 14, Part 15Part 16Part 17, Part 18, Part 19Part 20, Part 21


  1. The picture is great but this is the same text from Part 11.

  2. it happens. nice series.

  3. Love the visuals. great way to see the original story. Keep up the awesome work

  4. Nice as always!
    The transformation here was quite drastic

  5. Nicely done, and LOVE the picture for this one. One minor constructive critique, I would have liked it if the text of this one had included a description of the shirt becoming smaller and tied-off. Or, more generally; you actually described the outfit in the previous part, and I think that the appeal of describing changes in clothing resonates more if you can see the changes in the same part.

    I think this might be a bit of a personal thing, as I quite like descriptions of clothes changing into a sexy outfit, and even though you mentioned the outfit in the previous part you didn't put much focus on it. But really, this is nitpicking; this entry is great. Keep up the awesome work! :D

    1. I switched the clothes thing to the previous part because that one had more space for it. Thanks for the suggestion, though, I'll try to mind that in the future.