I've been messing-up the text a lot lately. Don't know what's happening. Fixed it again.
Spanish translation:
“Oh, no…
This is bad, very bad… I can’t go out looking like this. My family would lose
it! How am I going to explain to my family about what happened to me? I don’t
even know where to start.”
“What? Am I
talking Spanish? I can’t speak English? I don’t speak Spanish! What’s happening
to me? I don’t want to be like this! I don’t want to become a Latin woman!”
“I can’t go
home with this appearance.”
Previous stories: Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5, Part 6, Part 7, Part 8, Part 9, Part 10, Part 11
Follow ups: Part 13, Part 14, Part 15, Part 16, Part 17, Part 18, Part 19, Part 20, Part 21
The picture is great but this is the same text from Part 11.
ReplyDeleteit happens. nice series.
ReplyDeleteLove the visuals. great way to see the original story. Keep up the awesome work
ReplyDeleteNice as always!
ReplyDeleteThe transformation here was quite drastic
Thanks!
DeleteNext one will be even more so!
Nicely done, and LOVE the picture for this one. One minor constructive critique, I would have liked it if the text of this one had included a description of the shirt becoming smaller and tied-off. Or, more generally; you actually described the outfit in the previous part, and I think that the appeal of describing changes in clothing resonates more if you can see the changes in the same part.
ReplyDeleteI think this might be a bit of a personal thing, as I quite like descriptions of clothes changing into a sexy outfit, and even though you mentioned the outfit in the previous part you didn't put much focus on it. But really, this is nitpicking; this entry is great. Keep up the awesome work! :D
I switched the clothes thing to the previous part because that one had more space for it. Thanks for the suggestion, though, I'll try to mind that in the future.
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