Your writting is outstanding, BLZBub, and the story, particularly this part is quite clever.As constructive critisism, though, I would advice you to improve the pictures you select. This part in special is the worst off, but I also think there's room for improvement in the other ones.What I like the most about Planet's captions is that he always finds very attractive girls in his pictures, but still he always keeps them tasteful.Still, very impressive work! Hope you become a regular in the blog.
I really liked the combining/TG/AP aspects! To be fair, TG is always a plus but this was a creative way to do so. Really enjoying this series and the writing.
great work. love the story
This story is just outstanding. Text AND photos.
Nice one, I like the concept and it's well written. You're on a roll!