Tuesday, January 27, 2015

READER'S ENTRY: Abby Cadabra (Part 4)

Abby Cadabra (Part 4)
by BLZBub


Previous stories: Part 1, Part 2, Part 3

Follow ups: Part 5Part 6Epilogue


  1. Your writting is outstanding, BLZBub, and the story, particularly this part is quite clever.

    As constructive critisism, though, I would advice you to improve the pictures you select. This part in special is the worst off, but I also think there's room for improvement in the other ones.

    What I like the most about Planet's captions is that he always finds very attractive girls in his pictures, but still he always keeps them tasteful.

    Still, very impressive work! Hope you become a regular in the blog.

  2. I really liked the combining/TG/AP aspects! To be fair, TG is always a plus but this was a creative way to do so. Really enjoying this series and the writing.

  3. great work. love the story

  4. This story is just outstanding. Text AND photos.

  5. Nice one, I like the concept and it's well written. You're on a roll!