I made this part quite long too to make up for the delay. Pill 10 should come next week.
Special Vitamins (Pill 9)
Maggie couldn’t help but tremble as she took the bottle where Ann had
mixed another pill. The girl looked up at the imposing woman, feeling tinier
than ever before. If everything went right, she would soon become about her age
and size. She looked down at herself again. That was a lot of growing to go through.
“Just drink it, don’t worry yourself with doubts,” said Ann
encouragingly.
“Yeah, you’ll see how wonderful it gets,” said her sister Claire. “Are
you comfortable in that?”
Maggie nodded. While Ann prepared the new dosage, she had gone to change
herself into her mother’s clothes too. She had some summer short pants on and a
large pink bikini underneath. The top piece hung too much over her skinny
chest, so she had covered it with a jean blouse which she buttoned up to hide
her skin.
She looked at the bottle once again, and she just gulped it down so
suddenly she surprised herself, since she didn’t remember having ordered the
action.
“Waiting is always the worst part,” said Ann as the seconds passed. “The
anticipation at knowing what’s about to… Oh, see, I think it has started!”
Maggie had suddenly spurted a bit taller. It was just a few inches, but
she had been small enough to make a difference. She could also feel herself
getting heavier, as her mass and weight increased accordingly.
“My heart is racing like crazy,” she whispered scared. “Is that normal?”
“Calm down, it’s just the adrenaline,” said Ann. “Plus, I guess your
heart is getting bigger itself.”
That sounded distressing to Maggie, but she didn’t have much time to
linger on the thought. She was getting taller and taller, and now the leaps
were significant, and she gained inches in a matter of seconds. So far, her
legs were doing most of the growing; she suspected by the time she was done,
they would be more than double their former length. In any case, her shorts had
ridden up her thighs, which were also widening in diameter.
Her golden hair cascaded longer over her face, getting a bit messier
than she usually kept it, and her face had started to gain a bit of maturity,
that attracted the attention of all witnesses as her body still remained
generally skinny.
She now looked like a tall young teen. She pulled down the neck of her
blouse, though, because obviously her breasts had started to catch up with her
growth. They didn’t swell as massively as Ann’s or her sister’s had, at least
thus far, but they were more than enough to strain her mother’s bra, and she
unbuttoned her top to allow them to expand further.
The exceptionally cute teenager was giving place to a gorgeous young
woman. Like her sister Claire, Maggie was gaining very plump lips in adulthood,
and her blue eyes really shone on her perfected facial structure.
Her physique had become fuller yet, and though she had become only a bit
less curvy than Claire, she was surprised to find herself a couple of inches
taller when the changes ended.
“This is… this is…” words failed her as she looked down at the finished
result.
“Yeah…” said Claire, her eyes open like plates. “Going through it myself
was one thing, but watching my little sister…”
“And now I’ve witnessed both of you outsizing me,” said their brother
Jim.
Clare giggled a bit and even Maggie joined her.
“You’re still my big brother,” she said, but with her lower voice it
didn’t sound very convincing.
Ann suddenly felt like an intruder on a family scene.
“Well, I think I better leave you now. You’ll have a lot to figure out.
It’s was a pleasure doing business with you.”
The siblings thanked her, and Ann departed, leaving the two new women
and their brother on their own. Jim soon excused himself too and he went up to
check on his youngest siblings.
Maggie lost no time in going back to her mom’s bedroom. She peeled her
shorts with difficulty and got rid of her top so swiftly a few buttons actually
snapped on the process.
Just the sight of her bikini-clad lithe body compelled to arch her back
and head in a sudden wave of rejoice. Her skin, which was now almost
golden-colored glistened a bit under the sweat caused by the distressing
transformation.
There was a short knock and her older sister entered the room.
“Claire! I’m… I’m not dressed.”
Maggie tried in vain to cover herself with her arms.
“Oh, come on, sis. There’s no shame between us anymore.”
Claire stripped down of her clothes and laid herself on the bed after
dressing in her own form-fitting lingerie.
“Who could have thought we would end up like this?”
They both stood side to side in front of the mirror.
“I’m not sure why, but I can still tell I’m older than you,” commented
Claire.
“Yes, I see what you mean. I like being just a bit taller than you for a
change, tough,” said Maggie, and both giggled together again.
After a while, though, the fun restrained in her mind.
“We should get ready to face him,” she said, suddenly very serious.
Their guardian was due to be back very late, but she wanted to be prepared
nevertheless.
“Oh, relax, kiddo!” said Claire. “I’m ready to face him anytime! Plus,
he’s ages away. We won’t let this chance to play dress up together slip away!”
Maggie laughed silently, already feeling calmer. It was true. Why not
have some fun?
“I think we should be dressed to the nines,” said Claire, slipping into
a slinky red dress. “That way we’ll impress him further with our poise. Maybe
give him a heart attack to get rid of him altogether, if we’re lucky.”
“Claire!” yelled a scandalized Maggie, though she had to admit the idea
of the tyrant dropping dead sounded appealing.
Instead of going for a dress like her sister, Maggie had found some
jeans and a matching jacket.
“Wow, look at both our waists,” she observed. “They’re so tiny!”
“Yeah! They’re about the only thing that didn’t grow a lot,” agreed
Claire.
“Yeah. Our abs certainly did grow, though” said Maggie, holding up her
jacket to catch a better glimpse of her stomach.
She had been unable to zip up her pants, so she decided to follow
Claire’s lead and go with a dress.
The sisters had a lot of fun going through the clothes. Most of the
things were far too tight on them, but that added to the appeal.
“I never realized how many pretty dresses mom had!” noted Maggie.
“I guess that’s why grown women take so long to get dressed,” said
Claire. “I can’t decide which one to use, they all look great.”
But soon she picked a gorgeous pink model which she completed with her
mother’s jewelry, and she fluffed out her hair. She was really enjoying how her
now impressively manageable hair could become straight or wavy with just
minimal effort from her brush.
“What do you think?” asked Claire sitting on a chair.
“Wow. You look even bigger like that. And in those heels,” said her
sister.
“Yeah, he’ll have to look up -way
up- to us when he talks now. The heels were a great addition, but I don’t
think I should stand up too much while wearing them. We might be a bit too
heavy for them…”
“Yeah, I never thought about it. Well, we’ll have some special stilettos
made just for us!” enthused Maggie, who had gone with a dress that was mostly
yellow, her favorite color.
Just then, they heard a car pulling up in front of the house. Their
guardian had arrived.
“Ok, it’s time. Ready?” asked the eldest sister.
“Ready,” nodded the not-so-little one.
The man entered the house he expected to own soon with firm and sure
pace. He was tired, and he hoped those damn kids wouldn’t bother him.
“A necessary inconvenience,” he though. Without them, he couldn’t get
his clutches on their parent’s fortune.
He entered his room distractedly, and he almost had a start when he saw
someone already in there, laying on his bed.
It was a statuesque and enormous woman. He had never seen her before,
and yet there was something vaguely familiar on her beautiful face.
“You wouldn’t believe what happened to us today,” she commented
casually.
He backed up, and almost stumbled upon a second Amazonian blonde
reclined against the wall. This one was standing, and she absolutely towered
over him.
“Hello, little man,” she said looking down at him. “I don’t think we’ll
need a legal guardian any longer.”
He looked from one woman to the other and suddenly understood where he
had seen those faces.
A month had passed and the legalities were about to be completed. Today
was going to be their first day as lawful adults.
The new women arrived early at the notary to sign their new documents,
which would also grant Claire custody of her other siblings. Maggie, as second
sister, had no legal obligation, but she would of course stick around to help
her sister with the kids.
When they were done, they sat over the fence outside, enjoying the air
with their just acquired freedom.
“We made it,” said Maggie breathing in. “I can’t believe we finally made
it.”
“Yeah, it’s over now,” nodded Claire. “Well, not really over. We’re in fact starting. Now we have to actually raise
a family.”
“We’ll manage,” laughed Maggie standing up. She suddenly closed her eyes
and grabbed the fence, arching her back and head and breathing heavily for a
few seconds.
“Are you all right?” asked Claire worried.
“Yeah, fine. Just… you know. I’m starting my second period today.”
They had gone through their first one the same day they had transformed,
and they had already confirmed periods were a much different thing for
Vitamin-users than the long-suffering affair regular women endured.
Instead of pain and hot flashes, one day each month they went through frequent
waves of shivering pleasure as their hormonal activity renewed.
Back home, Claire was almost
jealous of her sister. She was wearing one of her new sets of lingerie,
celebrating both her new adult status and the fact that their former guardian
had finally abandoned the house. But she was sure she would be enjoying herself
much more if her own period had started.
Down in the backyard, Maggie was doing just that.
She had removed her top and put on her glasses as she laid there
enjoying the warm sun as it soaked her skin with sweet sweat, her back
perpetually arched as the powerful tingles spread from her womb through the
rest of her body.
She got up as the sensations tuned down a little and she stretched her impressively
chiseled figure. She could still bask in the sun a while longer, but she had
three younger siblings to care for. For all practical purposes, Claire and
Maggie were now their parents, and that made them much happier than the most
powerful climax in the world.
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Nice.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this one.
Would have enjoyed it if you had explored the altered relationship with the brother more, but other than it was perfect.
I especially liked the idea of their new periods. That was something new and different.
Yeah, I wanted to do something about the brother, but this got too long, so he almost doesn't interact with them and he's just sort of there, I agree.
DeleteWhat kind of thing did you have in mind? Maybe for a future story (Premature Maturation has a brother and sister, for instance, though that one is almost ready and I don't think I'll change it too much)
Speaking for myself and myself alone, I think you could've had some real fun with the brother's potential embarrassment of having his kid sister become so much more mature than he is. Since you enjoy female AP more than Male, I definitely think you could work in something like that to a future story. Maybe have them reconcile his feelings in the end. But there definitely should be some initial embarrassment and bashfulness from that brother.
DeleteI don't think that fits into your Premature Maturation universe as I remember what you have planned off the top of my head. But something to think about.
Really enjoyed this section. Aging up two sisters was a good choice.
~LM117
Thanks for your input, LM117.
DeleteIt would be certainly something I could try, though the humiliation of the characters isn't something that particularly appeals to me. I've noticed it's very common among certain authors to use that kind of plot where the male character is embarrassed because of the grown female one, but I've never been able to imbue my stories with enough meanness. Indeed, my siblings are usually very friendly and supportive, though I haven't had that many brothers in my stories, coming to think of it. In fact, love for their little siblings has been the main motivation of many voluntary APs before this one, so switching to humiliation might be uneasy for me.
But yes, if I find a plot where that would work, I could try to do it (Premature Maturation wouldn't fit into that, indeed)
It's true I don't enjoy writing Male AP that much, but if you're interested, two upcoming stories will feature it prominently. In fact, I've written a male AP process which I believe to be among my best, and I'm very proud of it. I would have never guessed it.
I concur with your opinion there. Too many AP stories are about humiliating and dominating formerly older siblings, often ones that have been ARed themselves. Not to say that it isn't a bad theme if the former older sibling deserves it, but it seems a lot of people are more focused on antagonistic siblings than supportive ones.
DeleteBy the way, I love your idea about a woman's period causing pleasure instead of pain. Not only would it make these monthly things less of a hassle, but biologically speaking, it would promote conception a lot more effectively.
Personally, I do prefer Female AP over Male AP, but occasionally, I think a balance is required to make plots a little fresher. Anyways, I'm eager to see those upcoming stories, particularly Premature Maturation.
Yeah, I love dramatic conflict as much as the next person, but it must be credible, and not just mean spiritedness for the sake of it. I quickly lose interest in those stories filled with cruelty and characters who will use every opportunity to "spank" the smaller ones.
DeleteIt's obvious those authors have some humiliation, masochistic fetish, which I simply don't share. My fantasy is about powerless characters finding power through their transformations. And I think power is much more satisfying when it's wielded with kindness instead of sadism. I've made a few revenge stories from time to time (Using the Medallion comes to mind), but I don't think even those characters are cruel.
About the period thing, I didn't do it to promote conception (I think there's enough overpopulation, and we should really stop to think the real value of having tons of children), but it was because of the other reason you gave. Periods are hell. It'd be nice if someone could enjoy them for a change!
I would also like to balance things since I know some people also like Male AP. I just couldn't find an interesting way to write them, maybe because their changes aren't as visible. As I said, I recently wrote a Male AP that I think is pretty good. I don't know if I could repeat that success on future stories, tough, but at least I think you'd be pleased with that one.
Ps. LOVE, LOVE doing this kind of discussion. I wish this could happen with all stories. Thank you!
Initial poster here.
DeleteI didn't mean humiliation or anything cruel. I actually don't care for stuff like that myself.
What I was talking about was more along the lines of exploring the change in roles between the boy and girl. Before, he was the older one but now he is the apparent younger sibling. Meanwhile, the younger sister has become the sexy older sister.
That would be awkward no matter what their previous relationship was. So basically you expand upon that. Like, at first she's unsure of herself in her new role, but as she becomes more comfortable as an adult she begins to act more like a big sister.
Perhaps he's surprised when she says something that sounds really mature. Maybe she bends over and he's embarrassed to see down her cleavage which leads to a discussion about showing off in front of guys.
You can even play it for comedy. Say they're out in public and she is still getting used to her role as the adult. She says or does something that betrays her true age and the brother has to cover for her to save her from embarrassment.
It's all be about their shift in relationship as she tries to become the older sister by catching up mentally to her physical changes, as well and how the brother struggles to accept that.
Yeah, that's something I could work with eventually. But that would require a longer story. Special Vitamins is just a collection short vignettes, and in fact this one was the longest.
DeleteThat's one on the reasons I've been wanting to stay away from short stories (and especially captions). Those never give you the opportunity to explore anything.
really hot, nice pictures !
ReplyDeleteThanks! Glad you liked the choice of pictures.
DeleteWhile I can enjoy most humiliation centric stories, I much prefer a story where there is balance between the humiliating aspects of the genre and the more supportive aspects. So, in this scenario, I think it would be a natural reaction for a brother to be intimidated and a bit embarrassed at a personal level when his younger sister grew past him. But then, that embarrassment could subside as his sister talks with him about the change and they come to an understanding.
ReplyDeleteI was not intending to suggest straight up meanness between the siblings. But rather that I think having a character be a little bashful initially as their status is reversed is natural and would be fun to explore.
Of course, this rarely happens. Most writers go straight for the pure humiliation, particularly in swap stories. I admittedly enjoy that most of the time, but I also like the empowering themes you have here in the AP. Alessi's "The Change of the Seasons" I think strikes a pretty good balance between the two extremes. I'd like to see some more of that balance and exploration here as well.
I too enjoy these discussions. I'm glad we can have such a dialogue here.
~LM117
Great! Hope we can discuss other stuff in future stories too.
DeleteI feel like I've done at least a story where the brother was intimidated by his transformed sister, but I can't remember which one.
Anyway, that's something that could be featured in a future story, but in the meantime probably won't fit, because I'm trying to feature male APs alongside with the females, so probably many of my upcoming brothers will grow alongside their sisters.
Maybe I should have said "SPOILER ALERT" XD
Another terrific chapter of this terrific story. I loved how you emphasized the near-giantess stature and proportions of the now-grown Claire and Maggie. I also liked the sweetness and overall positivity of tone of this story. I have to disagree with the others here,I HATE the frequent dark nastiness of a lot of AP growth stories,particularly the humiliation aspect. This one was very positive and THAT'S the kind of stories I like. In fact,I'd love to see a follow up to Claire and Maggie, to see how they're doing as young adults.Having one or both of them going off to college and becoming star basketball players as well as honors students while taking care of their younger siblings-and the difficulties they have juggling all 3-would be great.
ReplyDeleteAgain,another great job,would love to see the last chapters be much more like this and not negative.
Hey, thanks!
DeleteIf you'd like this story to go on a positive note, I think you'll be pleased.
You'll also have a very small update on these sisters on the next part, but overall I'm moving to new characters. But you probably noticed I liked these two enough to give them almost two parts from their point of view instead of Ann's, as is usual. Also, there were more pictures than ever in any Special Vitamins part.
Tell me what you think of the finale when it comes!
Best one yet? Perhaps.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteBest part of this? I don't know.
My best story ever? Faaaaaaaaaaar from it, I'm sure.