Friday, January 29, 2016

Special Vitamins (Pill 1)

Special Vitamins (Pill 1)
 by Thom

11 comments:

  1. Great start. I hope she has a lot of friends to give the vitamins to, and maybe even a younger sister.

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    1. The open ending was just that, not about making more parts. But maybe that's not a bad idea?

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    2. It'd be great to see more stories, and also before and after pics. I can understand why there wasn't one in this episode because it begins after she had already taken the pills.

      Race change would be cool, too.

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    3. Maybe I'll do more then. But I don't think they'll change their race, I'm not into that.

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  2. Not bad at all. Reminds me of another story I've read, only that one involved race change as well.

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    1. Thanks. Don't know that one.

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    2. Strong Vitamins by bobby. You can find it in the 2 Be Young Again story section.

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    3. I figured you were talking about Ethnic Candies

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  3. We ever gonna see you again?

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