Wednesday, May 3, 2017

Up the Elevator

Sorry about the text size. It was the only way it would fit. Open it on a different window to see it bigger.

Please comment. If you make me happy enough, I'll write a particularly sizable story (not just a caption) for the last day of the week, with a very nice and detailed transformation process.


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  1. AnonymousMay 3, 2017 at 9:39 PM

    This is good...interesting take!

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    1. The Planet of the APMay 4, 2017 at 4:42 AM

      Thanks! I had fun with it, even though it ended up much longer than I wanted.

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  2. AnonymousMay 3, 2017 at 11:08 PM

    Great cap with an interesting and original premise.

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    1. The Planet of the APMay 4, 2017 at 4:40 AM

      Thank you! I thought about it on an actual elevator.

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    2. AnonymousMay 4, 2017 at 11:45 AM

      What an active imagination XD, that shows your pasion for this genre. I liked the caption and how the aging was much more justified due to the "magic puberty" thingy. Really nice
      The Ap Master

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    3. The Planet of the APMay 4, 2017 at 1:57 PM

      Thanks! I also enujoy when they gain powers.

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  3. AnonymousMay 3, 2017 at 11:34 PM

    Very good. A caption this long could have been a multi parter though. Also am more interested in the aftermath of transformations, incl mental changes and ways people react diffetently to the changed woman.

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    1. The Planet of the APMay 4, 2017 at 4:35 AM

      I wanted to split it in two, but I didn't find the right pictures to do that.

      I'm also interested in aftermath and you know I usually do those, but the purpose of these short captions is to bring different things to the table. You'll like the next one, as it focus on the aftermath and a few reactions :)

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  4. BLZBubMay 4, 2017 at 3:21 AM

    A very interesting story, worth taking a close look just to read it. Using that elevator to change your age would be very tempting, but having to walk down a lot of stairs afterwards seems like it would be a real pain, unless warlocks have a faster means of getting from one floor to another.

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    1. The Planet of the APMay 4, 2017 at 4:38 AM

      Regrettably, there's only the stairs, so she'll have to endure that as payment for what she gained :P

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  5. UnknownMay 4, 2017 at 5:12 AM


    Interesting ... the elevator reminds me of the first tale of bela04. keep it up!

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  6. AngeloMay 4, 2017 at 10:29 AM

    Very cool caption

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    1. The Planet of the APMay 4, 2017 at 11:08 AM

      Thanks! Not the ideal picture I wanted, but I guess it works.

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  7. AnonymousMay 4, 2017 at 4:36 PM

    I still want an expansion of that caption "The Meteor."

    I loved the idea, as it reminded me of the Outer Limits episode "Music of the Spheres," a personal favorite of mine.

    I'd write one myself, but I'm not exactly good at this like you are.

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    1. The Planet of the APMay 4, 2017 at 6:32 PM

      Thanks.

      I don't know how to follow up that caption, since nobody else transforms. Only her descendants get her improved genes.

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    2. AnonymousMay 5, 2017 at 12:52 AM

      Well, I meant as something that could help all of humanity, though starting just with the few people at first. It would almost certainly be taken by the populace at large as a bad thing.
      As the incoming crisis becomes known, and they realize this was no accident--this was a gift meant to save us--those in power mass-produce this mysterious thing and distribute it to the general population, in the name of survival.
      It makes more sense if you've seen the episode, I admit.

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