It's a cute little story and not too bad. The only objection I have is that it doesn't match this month's theme. But I do strongly encourage other authors to contribute to this site, so maybe you should work on another store with a Sci-Fi theme.
Yeah, I noticed it doesn't fit the category at all, but there's a shortage of authors, so I'm quite lax about that.
Great story!
It's a cute little story and not too bad. The only objection I have is that it doesn't match this month's theme. But I do strongly encourage other authors to contribute to this site, so maybe you should work on another store with a Sci-Fi theme.
ReplyDeleteYeah, I noticed it doesn't fit the category at all, but there's a shortage of authors, so I'm quite lax about that.
DeleteGreat story!
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